Immerse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
visit
Who/What
aliens
Sentence
The aliens visit.
Add Detail: adverbs
often
_______
The aliens
visit the sea.
Re-read
Build
often
_______
visit the sea.
The aliens
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
explore
Who/What
aliens
Sentence
The aliens explore.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
At night,
____________
the aliens explore.
Re-read
Build
At night,
____________
the aliens explore.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a sea creature description?
Vehicle Text Recap
Sea Creature 1:the mechanical fish
Remember the exciting discoveries the boy made after getting the photos developed from the camera and revisit the illustrations.
Sea Creature 2:the sea turtles with shell cities on their backs
Sea Creature 3:tiny underwater aliens
Sea Creature 4: giant starfish with an island growing on its back
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
Illustration 1:the mechanical fish swimming amongst the shoal of red snappers
What can you hear? Is it loud or quiet?
Illustration 2:the sea turtles with shell cities on their backs
What can you see around you?
How might you describe this creature?
What would it feel like to touch?
Illustration 4: giant starfish with an island growing on its back, standing up in the water
Illustration 3:tiny underwater aliens with fish seahorses
What might the water feel like?
Is it calm or busy?
My turn to write a sea creature description.
Your turn to write a sea creature description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a sea creature description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
At night,
____________
the aliens explore.
often
_______
The aliens
visit the sea.
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Immerse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
visit
Who/What
aliens
Sentence
The aliens visit.
Add Detail: adverbs
often
_______
The aliens
visit the sea.
Re-read
Build
often
_______
visit the sea.
The aliens
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
explore
Who/What
aliens
Sentence
The aliens explore.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
At night,
____________
the aliens explore.
Re-read
Build
At night,
____________
the aliens explore.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a sea creature description?
Vehicle Text Recap
Sea Creature 1:the mechanical fish
Remember the exciting discoveries the boy made after getting the photos developed from the camera and revisit the illustrations.
Sea Creature 2:the sea turtles with shell cities on their backs
Sea Creature 3:tiny underwater aliens
Sea Creature 4: giant starfish with an island growing on its back
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
Illustration 1:the mechanical fish swimming amongst the shoal of red snappers
What can you hear? Is it loud or quiet?
Illustration 2:the sea turtles with shell cities on their backs
What can you see around you?
How might you describe this creature?
What would it feel like to touch?
Illustration 4: giant starfish with an island growing on its back, standing up in the water
Illustration 3:tiny underwater aliens with fish seahorses
What might the water feel like?
Is it calm or busy?
My turn to write a sea creature description.
Your turn to write a sea creature description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a sea creature description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
At night,
____________
the aliens explore.
often
_______
The aliens
visit the sea.