Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
grow
Who/What
they
Sentence
They grow larger.
Add Detail: word families
larger
_________
every year.
They grow
Re-read
Build
larger
_________
every year.
They grow
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
moves
Who/What
turtle
Sentence
The turtle moves.
Add Detail: noun choice
giant
_______
The turtle moves slowly but this
carries a city.
Re-read
Build
carries a city.
giant
_______
The turtle moves slowly but this
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let's recap 'Flotsam' up until the illustration of the boy taking a picture of himself.
A Message in a Bottle!
What?
Who?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read the Example Text
Secret Sea Creature Guide:
The Octopus Family
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
These remarkable eight-armed sea creatures have an unusual appearance. This octopus family slouch comfortably into their surroundings. Sprawled across padded cushions, eight gangly tentacles writhe around with minds of their own. Three little hatchlings wait with eager eyes that gleam like polished shells. The family’s shifting colours are a swirl of pearly blue with spots of seaweed green.
To attract their prey, the whole household works together to create a calm and inviting space. The biggest octopus reads a story from a sunken book while the three tiny youngsters perch on the footstool to listen. Rather cleverly, the octopus family organise for two patient anglerfish to dangle their glowing lights. With the lamps lit for storytelling, shoals of fish and smaller creatures arrive and huddle across the sofa. All seems cosy and calm… until the rush of forty tentacles snaffle fish, plankton and crabs into eager beaks.
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives. Underneath the furniture, the seabed is carpeted with crumbly sand. Sofas are anchored by coral bricks and armchairs lean against rocks. Their coffee table rests neatly on a patch of soft sponge. Overhead, gentle currents carry seaweed that sways like curtains in a watery breeze. Beyond the cosy lamplight, the vast ocean is dark and wild. They are hidden from view amongst the enclosed coral bed. The sunken removal van provides a perfect escape for whenever danger approaches.
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage. With a single thought, these marvellous molluscs can match their surroundings, so what appears to look like a sofa cushion might be a blinking eye! If you ever explore a shipwreck, beware… an inviting underwater living room scene might not be what it seems.
Example Text Vocabulary Time
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wreckage
remarkable
slouch
sprawled
Hover for definitions!
writhe
hatchlings
snaffle
camouflage
Hover for definitions!
like curtains in a watery breeze
minds of their own
gleam like polished shells
Hover for definitions!
anglerfish
plankton
beaks
seabed
Your turn to write Example Text vocabulary sentences.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
larger
_________
every year.
They grow
giant
_______
The turtle moves slowly but this
carries a city.
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Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
grow
Who/What
they
Sentence
They grow larger.
Add Detail: word families
larger
_________
every year.
They grow
Re-read
Build
larger
_________
every year.
They grow
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
moves
Who/What
turtle
Sentence
The turtle moves.
Add Detail: noun choice
giant
_______
The turtle moves slowly but this
carries a city.
Re-read
Build
carries a city.
giant
_______
The turtle moves slowly but this
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let's recap 'Flotsam' up until the illustration of the boy taking a picture of himself.
A Message in a Bottle!
What?
Who?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read the Example Text
Secret Sea Creature Guide: The Octopus Family
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
These remarkable eight-armed sea creatures have an unusual appearance. This octopus family slouch comfortably into their surroundings. Sprawled across padded cushions, eight gangly tentacles writhe around with minds of their own. Three little hatchlings wait with eager eyes that gleam like polished shells. The family’s shifting colours are a swirl of pearly blue with spots of seaweed green.
To attract their prey, the whole household works together to create a calm and inviting space. The biggest octopus reads a story from a sunken book while the three tiny youngsters perch on the footstool to listen. Rather cleverly, the octopus family organise for two patient anglerfish to dangle their glowing lights. With the lamps lit for storytelling, shoals of fish and smaller creatures arrive and huddle across the sofa. All seems cosy and calm… until the rush of forty tentacles snaffle fish, plankton and crabs into eager beaks.
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives. Underneath the furniture, the seabed is carpeted with crumbly sand. Sofas are anchored by coral bricks and armchairs lean against rocks. Their coffee table rests neatly on a patch of soft sponge. Overhead, gentle currents carry seaweed that sways like curtains in a watery breeze. Beyond the cosy lamplight, the vast ocean is dark and wild. They are hidden from view amongst the enclosed coral bed. The sunken removal van provides a perfect escape for whenever danger approaches.
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage. With a single thought, these marvellous molluscs can match their surroundings, so what appears to look like a sofa cushion might be a blinking eye! If you ever explore a shipwreck, beware… an inviting underwater living room scene might not be what it seems.
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
wreckage
remarkable
slouch
sprawled
Hover for definitions!
writhe
hatchlings
snaffle
camouflage
Hover for definitions!
like curtains in a watery breeze
minds of their own
gleam like polished shells
Hover for definitions!
anglerfish
plankton
beaks
seabed
Your turn to write Example Text vocabulary sentences.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
larger
_________
every year.
They grow
giant
_______
The turtle moves slowly but this
carries a city.