Plan Lesson 8
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
unpacked
Who/What
Sentence
I unpacked my bag.
Add Detail: verb prefixes
unpacked
reconsidered
_____________
__________________
what equipment was necessary as I
my bag.
Re-read
Build
what equipment was necessary as I
my bag.
reconsidered
__________________
unpacked
_____________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
everything
Sentence
Everything was terrifying.
Add Detail: semi-colons in lists
the awful, echoing silence;
Everything about it was terrifying:
the bitter, unforgiving cold
and the endless miles of ice.
Re-read
Build
and the endless miles of ice.
Everything about it was terrifying:
the bitter, unforgiving cold
the awful, echoing silence;
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use drama to gather ideas for my Survival Narrative?
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration 1: Frozen tundra and mountain image (pp. 8 – 9)
Illustration 2:Walking Among Giants (pp. 16 – 17)
Remember: You will be writing your own Survival Narrative as an explorer.
Illustration 3:Eyes in the Darkness (pp. 58 – 59)
Illustration 4:Voyage down the Amazon river image (pp. 60 – 61)
Illustration 5:Sandstorm image (pp. 118 – 119)
Drama: Sculpture
What expression will their face show?
How will their bodies be posed?
How might they say it?
What is around them?
How might they react?
How will their body move?
Use the five illustrations from the previous slide.
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
Let's gather ideas for your story.
Which key words would you chose to describe your character?
What does your character look like?
Gathering ideas for my character.
How do they react when they are in danger?
What does your character do?
How do they move, behave and react?
Can I gather ideas for my Survival Narrative?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
unpacked
reconsidered
_____________
__________________
what equipment was necessary as I
my bag.
the awful, echoing silence;
Everything about it was terrifying:
the bitter, unforgiving cold
and the endless miles of ice.
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Plan Lesson 8
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
unpacked
Who/What
Sentence
I unpacked my bag.
Add Detail: verb prefixes
unpacked
reconsidered
_____________
__________________
what equipment was necessary as I
my bag.
Re-read
Build
what equipment was necessary as I
my bag.
reconsidered
__________________
unpacked
_____________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
everything
Sentence
Everything was terrifying.
Add Detail: semi-colons in lists
the awful, echoing silence;
Everything about it was terrifying:
the bitter, unforgiving cold
and the endless miles of ice.
Re-read
Build
and the endless miles of ice.
Everything about it was terrifying:
the bitter, unforgiving cold
the awful, echoing silence;
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use drama to gather ideas for my Survival Narrative?
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration 1: Frozen tundra and mountain image (pp. 8 – 9)
Illustration 2:Walking Among Giants (pp. 16 – 17)
Remember: You will be writing your own Survival Narrative as an explorer.
Illustration 3:Eyes in the Darkness (pp. 58 – 59)
Illustration 4:Voyage down the Amazon river image (pp. 60 – 61)
Illustration 5:Sandstorm image (pp. 118 – 119)
Drama: Sculpture
What expression will their face show?
How will their bodies be posed?
How might they say it?
What is around them?
How might they react?
How will their body move?
Use the five illustrations from the previous slide.
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
Let's gather ideas for your story.
Which key words would you chose to describe your character?
What does your character look like?
Gathering ideas for my character.
How do they react when they are in danger?
What does your character do?
How do they move, behave and react?
Can I gather ideas for my Survival Narrative?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
unpacked
reconsidered
_____________
__________________
what equipment was necessary as I
my bag.
the awful, echoing silence;
Everything about it was terrifying:
the bitter, unforgiving cold
and the endless miles of ice.