Immerse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
fell
Who/What
Sentence
I fell to the floor.
Add Detail: adverbs
certainly
____________
die, or allow myself to fall to the floor and
It was either get bitten and
possibly
___________
survive.
Re-read
Build
Drag the adverbs to alter how likely the event is to happen.
possibly
___________
certainly
____________
Check
surely
_________
It was either get bitten and
___________________________________________________________________________
survive.
die, or allow myself to fall to the floor and
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
Sentence
I was an explorer.
Add Detail: hyphens for clarity
I was to become a world-renowned explorer.
______________
Re-read
Build
Drag the hyphen into the sentence to clarify the meaning.
Check
I was to become a world renowned explorer.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Freeze Frame
What might they say?
How can you show how they feel?
How might they say it?
What is around them?
How will their body move?
How might they react?
Assume the role of the main character in the Example Text.
Vehicle Text Quote
'Arrogance was my first mistake.'
'I was overoptimistic and underprepared.'
Let's explore these characteristics in more detail.
Hot Seating: Ask the character
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
What would you liketo ask the explorer?
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
certainly
____________
die, or allow myself to fall to the floor and
It was either get bitten and
survive.
possibly
___________
I was to become a world-renowned explorer.
______________
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Immerse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
fell
Who/What
Sentence
I fell to the floor.
Add Detail: adverbs
certainly
____________
die, or allow myself to fall to the floor and
It was either get bitten and
possibly
___________
survive.
Re-read
Build
Drag the adverbs to alter how likely the event is to happen.
possibly
___________
certainly
____________
Check
surely
_________
It was either get bitten and
___________________________________________________________________________
survive.
die, or allow myself to fall to the floor and
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
Sentence
I was an explorer.
Add Detail: hyphens for clarity
I was to become a world-renowned explorer.
______________
Re-read
Build
Drag the hyphen into the sentence to clarify the meaning.
Check
I was to become a world renowned explorer.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Freeze Frame
What might they say?
How can you show how they feel?
How might they say it?
What is around them?
How will their body move?
How might they react?
Assume the role of the main character in the Example Text.
Vehicle Text Quote
'Arrogance was my first mistake.'
'I was overoptimistic and underprepared.'
Let's explore these characteristics in more detail.
Hot Seating: Ask the character
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
What would you liketo ask the explorer?
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
certainly
____________
die, or allow myself to fall to the floor and
It was either get bitten and
survive.
possibly
___________
I was to become a world-renowned explorer.
______________