Analyse Lesson 7
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
hung around
Who/What
darkness
Sentence
The darkness hung around.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
The thick, heavy darkness of the long winter
_________________________________________________________________
hung around them.
Re-read
Build
hung around them.
The thick, heavy darkness of the long winter
_________________________________________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
breathed in
Subject
he
Sentence
He breathed in.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
the rich and warm smell of his mother's soft fur.
___________________________________________
He breathed in
Re-read
Build
He breathed in
the rich and warm smell of his mother's soft fur.
___________________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let's recap The Ice Bear up until 'And as the bear breathed...he heard in his heart the word "brother".'
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration:the boy surrounded by the polar bears
How does the boy look and feel at this moment in the story, just before he realises the bears are his family?
Remember: the boy was born to a polar bear family before being taken away by the raven.
'And as the bear breathed...he heard in his heart the word "brother".'
Illustration:the boy surrounded by the polar bears
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
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Feedback: Who did what well?
the rich and warm smell of his mother's soft fur.
___________________________________________
He breathed in
The thick, heavy darkness of the long winter
_________________________________________________________________
hung around them.
Y6D The Ice Bear Analyse L7
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Analyse Lesson 7
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
hung around
Who/What
darkness
Sentence
The darkness hung around.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
The thick, heavy darkness of the long winter
_________________________________________________________________
hung around them.
Re-read
Build
hung around them.
The thick, heavy darkness of the long winter
_________________________________________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
breathed in
Subject
he
Sentence
He breathed in.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
the rich and warm smell of his mother's soft fur.
___________________________________________
He breathed in
Re-read
Build
He breathed in
the rich and warm smell of his mother's soft fur.
___________________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let's recap The Ice Bear up until 'And as the bear breathed...he heard in his heart the word "brother".'
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration:the boy surrounded by the polar bears
How does the boy look and feel at this moment in the story, just before he realises the bears are his family?
Remember: the boy was born to a polar bear family before being taken away by the raven.
'And as the bear breathed...he heard in his heart the word "brother".'
Illustration:the boy surrounded by the polar bears
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the rich and warm smell of his mother's soft fur.
___________________________________________
He breathed in
The thick, heavy darkness of the long winter
_________________________________________________________________
hung around them.