Y2D Flower Block Write L11

Write Lesson 11

Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my diary?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Let me say the sentence before I click.

and

and

ran

up

up

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Check

up

and

ran

up

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and

Nobody

was

grumpy

and

felt

good

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Nobody

felt

and

grumpy

was

good

My turn to write.

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Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

held

Who/What

Sentence

I held my brother.

Add Detail: apostrophes for possession

hand

brother's

my

held

____________

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Build

held

brother's

____________

hand

my

___________________________________________________________________________

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Combine?

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Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my diary?

My turn to write Part 3.

plan

Sentence Checker

writer's voice

Working Wall

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Use the Sentence Checker

Use the Working Wall

Use your plan

Say before you write

Edit

Add

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Effect

Feel

Edit

Imagine

Sentence Choice

Word Choice

Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my diary?

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hand

brother's

my

held

____________

and

ran

up

up

Nobody

was

grumpy

and

felt

good