Immerse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
watched
Who/What
bear
Sentence
The bear watched.
Add Detail: relative clauses
, whose gaze was as black as night,
The bear
watched the boy.
____________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
, whose gaze was as black as night,
____________________________________________________
watched the boy.
Check
The bear
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
stretched
Subject
bear
Sentence
The bear stretched.
Add Detail: hyphens for clarity
The bear stretched her fur-fringed paws.
_________
Re-read
Build
Drag the hyphen into the sentence to clarify the meaning.
Check
The bear stretched her fur fringed paws.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a setting description?
Vehicle Text Recap: Arctic Setting
'the air was pure, clear as crystal'
'in the dark months, when the cold and the wind turned water to stone'
Think about the Arctic setting of The Ice Bear.Read the quotes and discuss what the effect is of the descriptions. How would you describe the setting?
'the scent of snow on the knife-edge of the wind'
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
Illustration 2:the Arctic ice and colours in the sky with the boy sat arranging the amber stones
Illustration 1: the polar bear on the ice with a dark and colourful sky
How can you show how they feel?
What might they say?
What is around them?
How might they say it?
How might they react?
How will their body move?
Illustration 3:the amber stones arranged in a heart shape, with the hunter approaching
My turn to write a setting description.
Your turn to write a setting description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a setting description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The bear stretched her fur-fringed paws.
_________
, whose gaze was as black as night,
The bear
watched the boy.
____________________________________________________
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Immerse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
watched
Who/What
bear
Sentence
The bear watched.
Add Detail: relative clauses
, whose gaze was as black as night,
The bear
watched the boy.
____________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
, whose gaze was as black as night,
____________________________________________________
watched the boy.
Check
The bear
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
stretched
Subject
bear
Sentence
The bear stretched.
Add Detail: hyphens for clarity
The bear stretched her fur-fringed paws.
_________
Re-read
Build
Drag the hyphen into the sentence to clarify the meaning.
Check
The bear stretched her fur fringed paws.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a setting description?
Vehicle Text Recap: Arctic Setting
'the air was pure, clear as crystal'
'in the dark months, when the cold and the wind turned water to stone'
Think about the Arctic setting of The Ice Bear.Read the quotes and discuss what the effect is of the descriptions. How would you describe the setting?
'the scent of snow on the knife-edge of the wind'
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
Illustration 2:the Arctic ice and colours in the sky with the boy sat arranging the amber stones
Illustration 1: the polar bear on the ice with a dark and colourful sky
How can you show how they feel?
What might they say?
What is around them?
How might they say it?
How might they react?
How will their body move?
Illustration 3:the amber stones arranged in a heart shape, with the hunter approaching
My turn to write a setting description.
Your turn to write a setting description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a setting description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The bear stretched her fur-fringed paws.
_________
, whose gaze was as black as night,
The bear
watched the boy.
____________________________________________________