Y2E The King Who Banned the Dark WO1 Analyse L6

Analyse Lesson 6

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

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dark

the

need

They

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Quick Build: a complete sentence

Verb

continue

Who/What

you

Sentence

You shouldn't continue.

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this

with

shouldn't

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ban

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ban

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shouldn't

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Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

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The Example Text has...

Opening and closing

Paragraphs

Persuasive language

Adjectives

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Dear citizen of the land, Over many years, I’ve been planning a great and wonderful new law for everyone in this mighty kingdom to follow. I, your majestic and wise king, am the bearer of a great plan. I propose that we ban all the miserable darkness from this magnificent land. This letter sets out some powerful reasons why.

Opening and closing

Paragraphs

Persuasive language

Adjectives

Click on / Click off

Writer's Knowledge

Apostrophes for missing letters

Questions to make the reader think

Commas for lists

Words and phrases to start each reason

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you're

I have

wouldn't

can not

don't

you are

can't

do not

I've

would not

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Dear citizen of the land, Over many years, I’ve been planning a great and wonderful new law for everyone in this mighty kingdom to follow. I, your majestic and wise king, am the bearer of a great plan. I propose that we ban all the miserable darkness from this magnificent land. This letter sets out some powerful reasons why.

Reveal

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Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Apostrophes for missing letters

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Apostrophes for missing letters

Questions to make the reader think

Commas for lists

Words and phrases to start each reason

Commas for lists

Let me show you

Drag the missing commas into the lists.

We feel sad tired and restless.

We can't sleep rest and relax when it is bright all the time.

We know you are a kind caring and gracious king.

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Commas for lists

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In addition to this, the dark is completely and utterly dull. You cannot do anything fun if you can’t see. In the blackness, you can’t find the toys you love to play with, you’re not allowed to visit your friend’s house and you cannot even read your favourite book. It only brings sadness, disappointment and boredom.

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Feel

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Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Commas for lists

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

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Writer's Knowledge

Apostrophes for missing letters

Questions to make the reader think

Commas for lists

Words and phrases to start each reason

Questions to make the reader think

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Let's discuss how these questions make the reader think.

Do you recall all those strange noises you hear at night?

You don't want to be punished, do you?

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First of all, and perhaps most importantly, you can’t see in the dark. The dark is unhelpful because you might not be able to notice things that get in your way. Toys could be lurking on the floor or a pair of socks could be waiting to trip you up. It is only in the light when we can see around us clearly. Wouldn’t you agree?

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Writer's Knowledge

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Commas for lists

Words and phrases to start each reason

Words and phrases to start each reason

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Drag the words and phrases that start each reason into the circle.

First of all,

darkness

Finally,

sadness

Wouldn't you agree?

In addition to this,

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Finally, the dark is full of sneaky creatures. Do you recall all those strange noises you hear at night? They’re animals of the night, like foxes, racoons and bats. Worse than that, burglars creep around in suspicious shadows so they can’t be seen. Banning the dark would remove this problem for you all.

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Feel

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Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Words and phrases to start each reason

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

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Question Quiz Time

Secret Selector

Team Competition

How will we answer our questions today?

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Tick Me

Tick the option that means 'you are' with an apostrophe to show where a letter is missing.

Tick one

A didn't

B your

C aren't

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D you're

Which One's Right?

Which one shows commas used correctly in a list?

A The dark brings, sadness disappointment, fear, and boredom.

B The dark brings sadness, disappointment, fear and boredom.

Yes or No?

Do these need question marks?

A Are you scared of the dark

Yes

No

B The dark is now banned

No

Yes

C Would you agree that the dark is bad

Yes

No

D What the dark brings is danger

No

Yes

Picture Me

Which image best shows the phrase ‘over many years’?

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

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Handwriting

Writing Effects

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Feedback: Who did what well?

D you're

First of all,

Finally,

In addition to this,

In addition to this, the dark is completely and utterly dull. You cannot do anything fun if you can’t see. In the blackness, you can’t find the toys you love to play with, you’re not allowed to visit your friend’s house and you cannot even read your favourite book. It only brings sadness, disappointment and boredom.

I, your great and caring leader, order all darkness to be banned from our noble country by the end of the month. You will suffer a great punishment if you are found breaking the new law. You don’t want to be punished, do you? Yours sincerely, The Glorious King of the Mighty Kingdom

this

with

shouldn't

continue

_______

ban

You

Finally, the dark is full of sneaky creatures. Do you recall all those strange noises you hear at night? They’re animals of the night, like foxes, racoons and bats. Worse than that, burglars creep around in suspicious shadows so they can’t be seen. Banning the dark would remove this problem for you all.

Finally, the dark is full of sneaky creatures. Do you recall all those strange noises you hear at night? They’re animals of the night, like foxes, racoons and bats. Worse than that, burglars creep around in suspicious shadows so they can’t be seen. Banning the dark would remove this problem for you all.

dark

the

need

They

In addition to this, the dark is completely and utterly dull. You cannot do anything fun if you can’t see. In the blackness, you can’t find the toys you love to play with, you’re not allowed to visit your friend’s house and you cannot even read your favourite book. It only brings sadness, disappointment and boredom.

I, your great and caring leader, order all darkness to be banned from our noble country by the end of the month. You will suffer a great punishment if you are found breaking the new law. You don’t want to be punished, do you? Yours sincerely, The Glorious King of the Mighty Kingdom

First of all, and perhaps most importantly, you can’t see in the dark. The dark is unhelpful because you might not be able to notice things that get in your way. Toys could be lurking on the floor or a pair of socks could be waiting to trip you up. It is only in the light when we can see around us clearly. Wouldn’t you agree?

In addition to this, the dark is completely and utterly dull. You cannot do anything fun if you can’t see. In the blackness, you can’t find the toys you love to play with, you’re not allowed to visit your friend’s house and you cannot even read your favourite book. It only brings sadness, disappointment and boredom.

Dear citizen of the land, Over many years, I’ve been planning a great and wonderful new law for everyone in this mighty kingdom to follow. I, your majestic and wise king, am the bearer of a great plan. I propose that we ban all the miserable darkness from this magnificent land. This letter sets out some powerful reasons why.

First of all, and perhaps most importantly, you can’t see in the dark. The dark is unhelpful because you might not be able to notice things that get in your way. Toys could be lurking on the floor or a pair of socks could be waiting to trip you up. It is only in the light when we can see around us clearly. Wouldn’t you agree?

rid

Get

the

lights

of

Finally, the dark is full of sneaky creatures. Do you recall all those strange noises you hear at night? They’re animals of the night, like foxes, racoons and bats. Worse than that, burglars creep around in suspicious shadows so they can’t be seen. Banning the dark would remove this problem for you all.

First of all, and perhaps most importantly, you can’t see in the dark. The dark is unhelpful because you might not be able to notice things that get in your way. Toys could be lurking on the floor or a pair of socks could be waiting to trip you up. It is only in the light when we can see around us clearly. Wouldn’t you agree?

Dear citizen of the land, Over many years, I’ve been planning a great and wonderful new law for everyone in this mighty kingdom to follow. I, your majestic and wise king, am the bearer of a great plan. I propose that we ban all the miserable darkness from this magnificent land. This letter sets out some powerful reasons why.

I, your great and caring leader, order all darkness to be banned from our noble country by the end of the month. You will suffer a great punishment if you are found breaking the new law. You don’t want to be punished, do you? Yours sincerely, The Glorious King of the Mighty Kingdom

We feel sad, tired and restless.

We can't sleep, rest and relax when it is bright all the time.

We know you are a kind, caring and gracious king.

I, your great and caring leader, order all darkness to be banned from our noble country by the end of the month. You will suffer a great punishment if you are found breaking the new law. You don’t want to be punished, do you? Yours sincerely, The Glorious King of the Mighty Kingdom

Dear citizen of the land, Over many years, I’ve been planning a great and wonderful new law for everyone in this mighty kingdom to follow. I, your majestic and wise king, am the bearer of a great plan. I propose that we ban all the miserable darkness from this magnificent land. This letter sets out some powerful reasons why.

I've

can't

you're

don't

wouldn't