Immerse Lesson 2
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
smelled
Who/What
he
Sentence
He smelled the cold.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
the cold, clean scent of the fresh snow on the sharp wind.
____________________________________________________________________________________
He smelled
Re-read
Build
the cold, clean scent of the fresh snow on the sharp wind.
____________________________________________________________________________________
He smelled
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
followed
Subject
they
Sentence
They followed the river.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
the river of paw prints across the frozen sea.
________________________________________
They followed
Re-read
Build
They followed
the river of paw prints across the frozen sea.
________________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a metaphor list poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
seldom
amber
gnawed
clutching
fur-fringed
bloodlust
Hover for definitions!
the knife-edge of the wind
ice tears carved scars on her cheeks
heart cracked like summer ice
circle of chaos
Hover for definitions!
ermine
caribou
parka
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let's look at the title and front cover before I read all of The Ice Bear.
Using Metaphors in Context
Illustration 2:the boy and his polar bear mother as they hug
Illustration 1: the boy and his polar bear mother when first reunited
First, look at the illustrations of the polar bear and suggest what she is like.
Now let me model write some of your ideas as metaphors.
Illustration 3:the polar bear protecting the boy from his father
My turn to write a metaphor list poem.
Your turn to write a metaphor list poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a metaphor list poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the river of paw prints across the frozen sea.
________________________________________
They followed
the cold, clean scent of the fresh snow on the sharp wind.
____________________________________________________________________________________
He smelled
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Immerse Lesson 2
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
smelled
Who/What
he
Sentence
He smelled the cold.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
the cold, clean scent of the fresh snow on the sharp wind.
____________________________________________________________________________________
He smelled
Re-read
Build
the cold, clean scent of the fresh snow on the sharp wind.
____________________________________________________________________________________
He smelled
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
followed
Subject
they
Sentence
They followed the river.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
the river of paw prints across the frozen sea.
________________________________________
They followed
Re-read
Build
They followed
the river of paw prints across the frozen sea.
________________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a metaphor list poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
seldom
amber
gnawed
clutching
fur-fringed
bloodlust
Hover for definitions!
the knife-edge of the wind
ice tears carved scars on her cheeks
heart cracked like summer ice
circle of chaos
Hover for definitions!
ermine
caribou
parka
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let's look at the title and front cover before I read all of The Ice Bear.
Using Metaphors in Context
Illustration 2:the boy and his polar bear mother as they hug
Illustration 1: the boy and his polar bear mother when first reunited
First, look at the illustrations of the polar bear and suggest what she is like.
Now let me model write some of your ideas as metaphors.
Illustration 3:the polar bear protecting the boy from his father
My turn to write a metaphor list poem.
Your turn to write a metaphor list poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a metaphor list poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the river of paw prints across the frozen sea.
________________________________________
They followed
the cold, clean scent of the fresh snow on the sharp wind.
____________________________________________________________________________________
He smelled