Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
needed
Who/What
he
Sentence
He needed to think.
Add Detail: verb prefixes
rethink
__________
his way home.
He needed to
Re-read
Build
his way home.
He needed to
rethink
__________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
The Arctic
Sentence
The Arctic was full of dangers.
Add Detail: colons for lists
The Arctic was full of dangers: foxes, wolves, lynxes and bears.
________________________________
Re-read
Build
Drag the colon into the sentence to introduce the list.
Check
The Arctic was full of dangers foxes, wolves, lynxes and bears.
________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Example Text?
Vehicle Text Recap
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
Let me re-read The Ice Bear before we discuss why there was conflict between the families, just before the boy chose to stay with both.
How?
When?
Example Text Vocabulary Time
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brutal
lurked
frenzied
nuzzled
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ventured
whine
nestled
poised
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eyes burning
dense labyrinth of evergreen
an ancient understanding was awoken from within
heart wrenched
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firs
sledgehammer
sealskin
Let me read the Example Text
The Arctic Wolf’s Child
Deep in the snow-covered forest of the Arctic, a baby wolf was born. He was surrounded by playful brothers and his mother loved him fiercely: he was protected from the hateful, brutal dangers around. Yet one day, the raven came. With wings as black as the darkest night, she swept away with the wolf pup and vanished: she was a shadow fading into dusk. On that very same day, far across the dense labyrinth of evergreen, a child was born into a cot lined with sealskin. The raven watched.
By the boy’s seventh year, he had become an adventurous explorer. His parents were out hunting: it was the boy’s chance to explore the endless frost-covered firs of the forest. He remembered his mother’s warning of the predators that lurked there: bears, foxes, lynxes and their dreaded enemy… wolves. He promised himself he would stay close to the edge, but his curiosity soon took hold and he ventured deeper into the trees where the weather worsened. After some time, falling snow concealed the forest trail. The snow was an icy breath of bitterness. Frozen and frightened, he turned for home, but realised he had no idea which direction to turn. He was lost. From the silent treetops, the raven watched.
Suddenly, the boy heard sounds: a growl, a soft whine and padding paws. The boy whipped around in frenzied fear: panic was a sledgehammer in his chest. A pack of wolves circled him.
“Stay back,” the boy cried, his voice trembling.
Yet the largest wolf nuzzled the boy gently and whispered, “Brother.” It was then that the boy also recognised them: he recalled a long-forgotten memory of a family he had once been part of. All the while, the raven watched.
The pack took the boy to the wolf-mother: she howled in grief and joy as he nestled into her strangely familiar fur. Soon, the echoing shouts of the boy’s human family drew closer through the forest until his parents found him. “Give us our boy back,” they cried desperately to the wolves, weapons poised.
“Mother, Father… these are my brothers,” the boy pleaded.
His wolf-mother wrapped around him protectively. Her eyes were burning flames. All the while, the raven watched.
The boy’s heart wrenched. He yearned to stay with the wolves: he yearned to return to his parents. In that moment, an ancient understanding was awoken from within. “I am at one with the wolves in winter and stay safe with you in summer. We are one: one soul, one people, one family,” he declared.
His human parents were stunned into quiet defeat, but deep in their hearts, his wisdom prevailed. All the while, the raven watched – all was as it should be.
Question Quiz Time
Team Competition
Secret Selector
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
What atmosphere is created in this sentence? 'After a while, winter's icy breath numbed his skin and concealed the forest trail.'
B calm and still, suggesting the forest is safe
A warm and comforting, showing the forest as welcoming
D threatening and bleak, suggesting danger
C busy and energetic with movement
Picture Me
Which image best shows the kind of forest the story is mainly set in?
Find Me
Find two phrases that show the boy was frightened when the wolves first found him.
Suddenly, the boy heard sounds: a growl, a soft whine and padding paws. The boy whipped around in frenzied fear: panic was a sledgehammer in his chest. A pack of wolves circled him.
panic was a sledgehammer in his chest
whipped around in frenzied fear
Tick Me
Check
What choices does the boy make at the end of the story? Tick two.
A To live only with his human family.
B To live with the wolves in winter.
C To stay with both the wolves and his human family.
D To leave the forest forever.
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The Arctic was full of dangers: foxes, wolves, lynxes and bears.
________________________________
rethink
__________
his way home.
He needed to
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Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
needed
Who/What
he
Sentence
He needed to think.
Add Detail: verb prefixes
rethink
__________
his way home.
He needed to
Re-read
Build
his way home.
He needed to
rethink
__________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
The Arctic
Sentence
The Arctic was full of dangers.
Add Detail: colons for lists
The Arctic was full of dangers: foxes, wolves, lynxes and bears.
________________________________
Re-read
Build
Drag the colon into the sentence to introduce the list.
Check
The Arctic was full of dangers foxes, wolves, lynxes and bears.
________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Example Text?
Vehicle Text Recap
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
Let me re-read The Ice Bear before we discuss why there was conflict between the families, just before the boy chose to stay with both.
How?
When?
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
brutal
lurked
frenzied
nuzzled
Hover for definitions!
ventured
whine
nestled
poised
Hover for definitions!
eyes burning
dense labyrinth of evergreen
an ancient understanding was awoken from within
heart wrenched
Hover for definitions!
firs
sledgehammer
sealskin
Let me read the Example Text
The Arctic Wolf’s Child
Deep in the snow-covered forest of the Arctic, a baby wolf was born. He was surrounded by playful brothers and his mother loved him fiercely: he was protected from the hateful, brutal dangers around. Yet one day, the raven came. With wings as black as the darkest night, she swept away with the wolf pup and vanished: she was a shadow fading into dusk. On that very same day, far across the dense labyrinth of evergreen, a child was born into a cot lined with sealskin. The raven watched.
By the boy’s seventh year, he had become an adventurous explorer. His parents were out hunting: it was the boy’s chance to explore the endless frost-covered firs of the forest. He remembered his mother’s warning of the predators that lurked there: bears, foxes, lynxes and their dreaded enemy… wolves. He promised himself he would stay close to the edge, but his curiosity soon took hold and he ventured deeper into the trees where the weather worsened. After some time, falling snow concealed the forest trail. The snow was an icy breath of bitterness. Frozen and frightened, he turned for home, but realised he had no idea which direction to turn. He was lost. From the silent treetops, the raven watched.
Suddenly, the boy heard sounds: a growl, a soft whine and padding paws. The boy whipped around in frenzied fear: panic was a sledgehammer in his chest. A pack of wolves circled him. “Stay back,” the boy cried, his voice trembling. Yet the largest wolf nuzzled the boy gently and whispered, “Brother.” It was then that the boy also recognised them: he recalled a long-forgotten memory of a family he had once been part of. All the while, the raven watched.
The pack took the boy to the wolf-mother: she howled in grief and joy as he nestled into her strangely familiar fur. Soon, the echoing shouts of the boy’s human family drew closer through the forest until his parents found him. “Give us our boy back,” they cried desperately to the wolves, weapons poised. “Mother, Father… these are my brothers,” the boy pleaded. His wolf-mother wrapped around him protectively. Her eyes were burning flames. All the while, the raven watched.
The boy’s heart wrenched. He yearned to stay with the wolves: he yearned to return to his parents. In that moment, an ancient understanding was awoken from within. “I am at one with the wolves in winter and stay safe with you in summer. We are one: one soul, one people, one family,” he declared. His human parents were stunned into quiet defeat, but deep in their hearts, his wisdom prevailed. All the while, the raven watched – all was as it should be.
Question Quiz Time
Team Competition
Secret Selector
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
What atmosphere is created in this sentence? 'After a while, winter's icy breath numbed his skin and concealed the forest trail.'
B calm and still, suggesting the forest is safe
A warm and comforting, showing the forest as welcoming
D threatening and bleak, suggesting danger
C busy and energetic with movement
Picture Me
Which image best shows the kind of forest the story is mainly set in?
Find Me
Find two phrases that show the boy was frightened when the wolves first found him.
Suddenly, the boy heard sounds: a growl, a soft whine and padding paws. The boy whipped around in frenzied fear: panic was a sledgehammer in his chest. A pack of wolves circled him.
panic was a sledgehammer in his chest
whipped around in frenzied fear
Tick Me
Check
What choices does the boy make at the end of the story? Tick two.
A To live only with his human family.
B To live with the wolves in winter.
C To stay with both the wolves and his human family.
D To leave the forest forever.
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The Arctic was full of dangers: foxes, wolves, lynxes and bears.
________________________________
rethink
__________
his way home.
He needed to