Y3D Pip & Egg Plan L9

Plan Lesson 9

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Conjunctions

Let me say the sentence before I click.

____

she roosted

before

Egg ruffled

her feathers

Re-read

Build

before

____

her feathers

she roosted

Egg ruffled

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Let me say the sentences before I choose one.

Plural or Possessive?

The

rustled

leaves

trees

on the

_____

rustled

The

leaves

tree's

_____

The

rustled

leaves

trees'

_____

Re-read

Build

tree's

trees'

_______

leaves

The

rustled

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Re-read

Build

tree's

trees'

_______

leaves

The

rustled

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Transformation Narrative?

How Transformation Narratives Work

Firstly: The story shows how Egg and Pip become friends and change as Egg turns into a bird and flies away.

Then:Egg explores the first and second settings.

Finally:Egg returns to nest - Pip has transformed!

Let me show you how to plan.

Teacher's Plan: Egg and Pip- the statue - the street

Example Text: Egg and Pip- the valley- the pylon cables

Your Plan: Egg and Pip - the river -the city

Part 1: Egg and Pip become friends and change

Part 2: Egg turns into a bird and flies away

What good writing looks like

This will show you how to plan and write

Part 3: Egg explores first setting

Part 4: Egg explores second setting

Part 5: Egg returns to nest. Pip has transformed

My Turn: Part 1

Your Turn: Part 1

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

Pictures

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 2

Your Turn: Part 2

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 3

Your Turn: Part 3

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 4

Your Turn: Part 4

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 5

Your Turn: Part 5

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Completed Plan

Click

Now talk through your plan

Can I plan my Transformation Narrative?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

____

she roosted

before

Egg ruffled

her feathers

The

rustled

leaves

trees'

_____

rustled

The

leaves

tree's

_____