Plan Lesson 9
Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Transformation Narrative?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
ruffled
Who/What
Egg
Sentence
Egg ruffled her feathers.
Add Detail: conjunctions
she roosted.
Egg ruffled her feathers
before
_________
Re-read
Build
she roosted.
before
_________
Egg ruffled her feathers
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
rustled
Who/What
leaves
Sentence
The leaves rustled.
Add Detail: possessive apostrophe
leaves rustled.
trees'
_______
The
Re-read
Build
The
trees'
_______
leaves rustled.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Transformation Narrative?
How Transformation Narratives Work
Firstly: The story shows how Egg and Pip become friends and change as Egg turns into a bird and flies away.
Then:Egg explores the first and second settings.
Finally:Egg returns to nest - Pip has transformed!
Let me show you how to plan.
Teacher's Plan: Egg and Pip- the statue - the street
Example Text: Egg and Pip- the valley- the pylon cables
Your Plan: Egg and Pip - the river -the city
Part 1: Egg and Pip become friends and change
Part 2: Egg turns into a bird and flies away
What good writing looks like
This will show you how to plan and write
Part 3: Egg explores first setting
Part 4: Egg explores second setting
Part 5: Egg returns to nest. Pip has transformed
My Turn: Part 1
Your Turn: Part 1
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
Pictures
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 2
Your Turn: Part 2
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 3
Your Turn: Part 3
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 4
Your Turn: Part 4
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 5
Your Turn: Part 5
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Completed Plan
Click
Now talk through your plan
Can I plan my Transformation Narrative?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
she roosted.
Egg ruffled her feathers
before
_________
leaves rustled.
trees'
_______
The
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Plan Lesson 9
Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Transformation Narrative?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
ruffled
Who/What
Egg
Sentence
Egg ruffled her feathers.
Add Detail: conjunctions
she roosted.
Egg ruffled her feathers
before
_________
Re-read
Build
she roosted.
before
_________
Egg ruffled her feathers
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
rustled
Who/What
leaves
Sentence
The leaves rustled.
Add Detail: possessive apostrophe
leaves rustled.
trees'
_______
The
Re-read
Build
The
trees'
_______
leaves rustled.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Transformation Narrative?
How Transformation Narratives Work
Firstly: The story shows how Egg and Pip become friends and change as Egg turns into a bird and flies away.
Then:Egg explores the first and second settings.
Finally:Egg returns to nest - Pip has transformed!
Let me show you how to plan.
Teacher's Plan: Egg and Pip- the statue - the street
Example Text: Egg and Pip- the valley- the pylon cables
Your Plan: Egg and Pip - the river -the city
Part 1: Egg and Pip become friends and change
Part 2: Egg turns into a bird and flies away
What good writing looks like
This will show you how to plan and write
Part 3: Egg explores first setting
Part 4: Egg explores second setting
Part 5: Egg returns to nest. Pip has transformed
My Turn: Part 1
Your Turn: Part 1
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
Pictures
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 2
Your Turn: Part 2
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 3
Your Turn: Part 3
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 4
Your Turn: Part 4
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 5
Your Turn: Part 5
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Completed Plan
Click
Now talk through your plan
Can I plan my Transformation Narrative?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
she roosted.
Egg ruffled her feathers
before
_________
leaves rustled.
trees'
_______
The