Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
sighed
Who/What
Pip
Sentence
Pip sighed.
Add Detail: inverted commas
"I will miss you,"
Pip sighed.
Re-read
Build
"I will miss you,"
Pip sighed.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
explained
Egg
Who/What
Sentence
Egg explained.
Add Detail: speech punctuation
"I must see the world,"
Egg explained.
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
Egg explained
I must see the world
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Illustration 1: Egg has newly hatched from the shell
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read the first part of Pip & Egg again (until the end of the page that starts 'When Egg stepped out, she was not the same Egg she’d been').
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
Illustration 1: Egg has newly hatched from the shell
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
"I will miss you,"
Pip sighed.
"I must see the world,"
Egg explained.
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Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
sighed
Who/What
Pip
Sentence
Pip sighed.
Add Detail: inverted commas
"I will miss you,"
Pip sighed.
Re-read
Build
"I will miss you,"
Pip sighed.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
explained
Egg
Who/What
Sentence
Egg explained.
Add Detail: speech punctuation
"I must see the world,"
Egg explained.
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
Egg explained
I must see the world
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Illustration 1: Egg has newly hatched from the shell
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read the first part of Pip & Egg again (until the end of the page that starts 'When Egg stepped out, she was not the same Egg she’d been').
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
Illustration 1: Egg has newly hatched from the shell
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
"I will miss you,"
Pip sighed.
"I must see the world,"
Egg explained.