Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Conjunctions
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when
_____
Egg felt the breeze
she flew
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when
_____
Egg felt the breeze
she flew
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
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Expanded noun phrases
Let me say the sentence before I click.
She soared across
the lush valley below her
________________________
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Build
the lush valley below her
________________________
She soared across
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Pip & Egg again.
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
rustle
burrowing
fluttered
chirped
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zigzagging
trickling
swooped
nestled
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the miles under her wings
lifted off
rooted to the spot
settle into her heart
warmth of being home
smell of salt on the wind
Hover for definitions!
shore
valley
pylon
Let me read the Example Text.
Egg and Pip
There was once a shiny, speckled egg who met a little seed called Pip. Egg and Pip loved being the same size and they soon became the best of friends. They went everywhere together, laughed together and invented games together. Egg believed that they would always stay side by side. One day, something changed. Pip found himself rooted to the spot! Tiny green shoots were reaching down and burrowing into the earth. This meant he could not go anywhere with Egg. Pip’s heart was as heavy as a stone. Just then, Egg started to change too…
One warm afternoon, Egg felt a bit different. She was no longer small and round when Pip spotted her. She had become a little bird with a blue beak and scruffy feathers! Pip was ever so impressed. Egg stretched out and felt the soft breeze rustle her new wings. After a few days, Egg’s wings started growing longer and stronger. She looked at the sky and her heart filled with excitement. “Go and explore, then fly back and tell me all about it,” Pip said. Something inside Egg stirred. She fluttered her feathers and chirped an excited goodbye. She lifted off and let the wind carry her up into the sky.
Egg soared out across the sunlit valley. The air felt cool and fresh. A sparkling stream curved around an enchanting wood like a ribbon of silver. She swooped, dipped and twittered while the sunlight danced on the water below. It was magical. She had now begun to see just how wide and wonderful the world was. The miles under her wings soon felt heavy and consequently Egg grew tired. She stopped to rest with the gentle stream trickling nearby. She thought of Pip and wished he could be here with her, too.
As she flew onwards, Egg caught the smell of salt on the wind. She soared over a busy town beside the sea. Cars rumbled below her and waves rippled in the distance. Egg landed carefully to perch on a pylon cable. She watched cars zigzagging through the streets below. She giggled at the seagulls diving down to the shore. All the fizzy lights sparkled like glittering stars. Everything was unbelievably exciting and unbelievably loud. Egg missed the quietness of the valley. She missed her friend Pip. That evening, she decided it was time to return home.
Egg left the town with its pylons and noise and eventually found the winding stream. She followed it until she finally reached the place she knew best. “Welcome home, Egg!” an eager voice cried. She looked down from the sky and gasped. Pip had completely transformed! He was now a magnificent tree with strong branches and the shiniest leaves. “Pip! You’ve grown!” Egg cried out in disbelief and nestled into a branch. She let the warmth of being home settle into her heart. Egg and Pip knew they would always be there for each other. This was a true friendship. They would always be the best of friends no matter how much they changed.
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Why does Egg decide to return home after exploring?
Because she missed Pip and the valley
Because she wanted to sleep
Because she felt bored of the city
Because she was scared of flying
Tick Me
Pip says, "Go and explore, then fly back and tell me all about it" to Egg.What does this tell you about Pip's character?
Tick one
Pip is annoyed and hurt that Egg is leaving him.
Pip is bossy and wants to know everything Egg does.
Reveal
Pip is supportive of his friend.
Find Me
Which words and phrases make the river setting seem magical?
The air felt cool and fresh. A sparkling stream curved around an enchanting wood like a ribbon of silver.
enchanting
like a ribbon of silver
sparkling
Tick Me
What did Egg miss while she was away?Choose two things.
Tick two
the quietness
the sparkling river
the colours of the trees
Reveal
her friend Pip
Your turn to write sentences using the new vocabulary.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the lush valley below her
________________________
She soared across
when
_____
Egg felt the breeze
she flew
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Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Conjunctions
Let me say the sentence before I click.
when
_____
Egg felt the breeze
she flew
Re-read
Build
when
_____
Egg felt the breeze
she flew
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Expanded noun phrases
Let me say the sentence before I click.
She soared across
the lush valley below her
________________________
Re-read
Build
the lush valley below her
________________________
She soared across
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Pip & Egg again.
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
rustle
burrowing
fluttered
chirped
Hover for definitions!
zigzagging
trickling
swooped
nestled
Hover for definitions!
the miles under her wings
lifted off
rooted to the spot
settle into her heart
warmth of being home
smell of salt on the wind
Hover for definitions!
shore
valley
pylon
Let me read the Example Text.
Egg and Pip
There was once a shiny, speckled egg who met a little seed called Pip. Egg and Pip loved being the same size and they soon became the best of friends. They went everywhere together, laughed together and invented games together. Egg believed that they would always stay side by side. One day, something changed. Pip found himself rooted to the spot! Tiny green shoots were reaching down and burrowing into the earth. This meant he could not go anywhere with Egg. Pip’s heart was as heavy as a stone. Just then, Egg started to change too…
One warm afternoon, Egg felt a bit different. She was no longer small and round when Pip spotted her. She had become a little bird with a blue beak and scruffy feathers! Pip was ever so impressed. Egg stretched out and felt the soft breeze rustle her new wings. After a few days, Egg’s wings started growing longer and stronger. She looked at the sky and her heart filled with excitement. “Go and explore, then fly back and tell me all about it,” Pip said. Something inside Egg stirred. She fluttered her feathers and chirped an excited goodbye. She lifted off and let the wind carry her up into the sky.
Egg soared out across the sunlit valley. The air felt cool and fresh. A sparkling stream curved around an enchanting wood like a ribbon of silver. She swooped, dipped and twittered while the sunlight danced on the water below. It was magical. She had now begun to see just how wide and wonderful the world was. The miles under her wings soon felt heavy and consequently Egg grew tired. She stopped to rest with the gentle stream trickling nearby. She thought of Pip and wished he could be here with her, too.
As she flew onwards, Egg caught the smell of salt on the wind. She soared over a busy town beside the sea. Cars rumbled below her and waves rippled in the distance. Egg landed carefully to perch on a pylon cable. She watched cars zigzagging through the streets below. She giggled at the seagulls diving down to the shore. All the fizzy lights sparkled like glittering stars. Everything was unbelievably exciting and unbelievably loud. Egg missed the quietness of the valley. She missed her friend Pip. That evening, she decided it was time to return home.
Egg left the town with its pylons and noise and eventually found the winding stream. She followed it until she finally reached the place she knew best. “Welcome home, Egg!” an eager voice cried. She looked down from the sky and gasped. Pip had completely transformed! He was now a magnificent tree with strong branches and the shiniest leaves. “Pip! You’ve grown!” Egg cried out in disbelief and nestled into a branch. She let the warmth of being home settle into her heart. Egg and Pip knew they would always be there for each other. This was a true friendship. They would always be the best of friends no matter how much they changed.
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Why does Egg decide to return home after exploring?
Because she missed Pip and the valley
Because she wanted to sleep
Because she felt bored of the city
Because she was scared of flying
Tick Me
Pip says, "Go and explore, then fly back and tell me all about it" to Egg.What does this tell you about Pip's character?
Tick one
Pip is annoyed and hurt that Egg is leaving him.
Pip is bossy and wants to know everything Egg does.
Reveal
Pip is supportive of his friend.
Find Me
Which words and phrases make the river setting seem magical?
The air felt cool and fresh. A sparkling stream curved around an enchanting wood like a ribbon of silver.
enchanting
like a ribbon of silver
sparkling
Tick Me
What did Egg miss while she was away?Choose two things.
Tick two
the quietness
the sparkling river
the colours of the trees
Reveal
her friend Pip
Your turn to write sentences using the new vocabulary.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the lush valley below her
________________________
She soared across
when
_____
Egg felt the breeze
she flew