Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a simile poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
She
Sentence
She was a friend.
Add Detail: word families
She was a good
friend.
_________
Re-read
Build
friend.
_________
She was a good
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
The city
Sentence
The city was exciting.
Add Detail: noun choice
The
city
place.
________
was such an exciting
Re-read
Build
was such an exciting
The
place.
________
city
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a simile poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
shoot
chirp
glossy
scruffy
speck
thrilled
two peas in a pod
pinky-promised
birds of a feather
glaciers
roosted
stem
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Pip & Egg
Simile Poem
Who?
What?
Illustration 1: Egg flying over the waterfall and river, approaching the city (double-page illustration starting with the line 'It was filled with people and noise and breadcrumbs')
Where?
Why?
Illustration 2: Egg flying through the city with the other birds (single-page illustration starting with the line ‘It was filled with people and noise and breadcrumbs’)
How?
When?
My turn to write a simile poem.
Your turn to write a simile poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a simile poem?
CEW
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Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
She was a good
friend.
_________
The
city
place.
________
was such an exciting
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Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a simile poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
She
Sentence
She was a friend.
Add Detail: word families
She was a good
friend.
_________
Re-read
Build
friend.
_________
She was a good
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
The city
Sentence
The city was exciting.
Add Detail: noun choice
The
city
place.
________
was such an exciting
Re-read
Build
was such an exciting
The
place.
________
city
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a simile poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
shoot
chirp
glossy
scruffy
speck
thrilled
two peas in a pod
pinky-promised
birds of a feather
glaciers
roosted
stem
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Pip & Egg
Simile Poem
Who?
What?
Illustration 1: Egg flying over the waterfall and river, approaching the city (double-page illustration starting with the line 'It was filled with people and noise and breadcrumbs')
Where?
Why?
Illustration 2: Egg flying through the city with the other birds (single-page illustration starting with the line ‘It was filled with people and noise and breadcrumbs’)
How?
When?
My turn to write a simile poem.
Your turn to write a simile poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a simile poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
She was a good
friend.
_________
The
city
place.
________
was such an exciting