Y2D Grandad's Camper Write L11

Write Lesson 11

Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Memory Narrative?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

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and

had

and

chips

fish

They

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They

and

fish

had

chips

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Which one shall I choose?

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-ing -ed -er

went

Grandad

camping

river

Grandad

camped

by

the

Grandad

had

camper

pink

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camping

went

Grandad

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the

river

by

camped

Grandad

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had

camper

Grandad

pink

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Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

were going

Who/What

Grandad and Gramps

Sentence

Grandad and Gramps were going.

Add Detail: tense

were

to

going

Grandad

Gramps

and

beach

the

________________

Re-read

Build

and

to

Grandad

were

______

the

Gramps

going

________

beach

___________________________________________________________________________

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Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Memory Narrative?

My turn to write Part 2.

plan

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writer's voice

Working Wall

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Use your plan

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Add

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Effect

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Sentence Choice

Word Choice

Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Memory Narrative?

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had

and

chips

fish

They

were

to

going

Grandad

Gramps

and

beach

the

________________

went

Grandad

camping

river

Grandad

camped

by

the

Grandad

had

camper

pink