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Y2D Grandad's Camper Analyse L6

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Analyse Lesson 6

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Let me say the sentence before I click.

CVCC

van

was

The

pink

Say, Count, Build, Re-read

Click if correct
Check

The

van

pink

was

My turn to write.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write. Let me say it. Now you write it.

Sentence Checker

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un-

camper

We

unlocked

the

van

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Click if correct
Check

the

We

camper

van

unlocked

My turn to write.

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Your turn to write. Let me say it. Now you write it.

Sentence Checker

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Apostrophes for Possession

pink

Grandad's

camper

was

Re-read

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Check

was

Grandad's

camper

pink

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Listen to my writer's voice.
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Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?

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Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has

The Example Text has...

Paragraphs

Title

Alliteration

Verbs

Text structure

Features

Grandad's Memories

My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?

Title

Paragraph

Alliteration

Verbs

Click on / Click off

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases for feelings

Apostrophes to show belonging

Past tense

Similes

Let's work in:

Stations
Pairs
Groups

Memorize the positions

Past tense

Let me show you

Add the missing words to the sentences to make them past tense.

was
were
Grandad holding the photo album.
Grandad and Gramps happy.
Reveal

Past tense

Let's find and discuss

Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Past tense

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases for feelings

Apostrophes to show belonging

Past tense

Similes

Apostrophes to show belonging

Let me show you

Add the missing apostrophes to show belonging.

's

's

's

1. Grandad camper needed fixing.

2. The sun light was dazzling.

3. The album photos were special.

Reveal

Apostrophes to show belonging

Let's find and discuss

Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.

Replace?

Feel

Remove?

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Apostophes to show belonging

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases for feelings

Apostrophes to show belonging

Past tense

Similes

Words and phrases for feelings

Let me show you

Drag the words and phrases that best describe how travelling the world made Grandad feel.

stories of their adventures

adventurous

excited

sky full of sparkling stars

lush valley

Reveal

Words and phrases for feelings

Let's find and discuss

Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?

Reveal

Replace?

Feel

Imagine

Remove?

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Words and phrases for feelings

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases for feelings

Apostrophes to show belonging

Past tense

Similes

Similes

Let me show you

Match the simile to the image it is describing.

The sheep were as fluffy as clouds.

The stars were like diamonds in the sky.

The sun was shining like gold.

Reveal

Similes

Let's find and discuss

Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?

Reveal

Replace?

Feel

Remove?

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Similes

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Question Quiz Time

Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up

Tick Me

Which sentence contains a past tense verb?

Tick one

A He was driving.

B They are happy.

C Grandad is happy.

Check

Which One's Right?

Which one shows that the camper belonged to Grandad?

B Grandad's camper

A Grandads camper

D Granda'ds camper

C Grandads' camper

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True or False?

The word 'marvelled' shows how Grandad felt about the sun.

True
False

Picture Me

Which image best shows this simile?shining like gold

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

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Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

A He was driving.

___

adventurous

excited

The sheep were as fluffy as clouds.

The stars were like diamonds in the sky.

The sun was shining like gold.

My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?

pink

Grandad's

camper

was

Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.

Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.

camper

We

unlocked

the

van

Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.

Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?

Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.

Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.

Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.

van

was

The

pink

was
Grandad holding the photo album.
were
Grandad and Gramps happy.
Reveal
Reveal

1. Grandad camper needed fixing.

's

2. The sun light was dazzling.

's

3. The album photos were special.

's

Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?

My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?

Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?

Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?

Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.