Analyse Lesson 6
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van
was
The
pink
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camper
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We
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Verb
needed cleaning
Who/What
van
Sentence
The van needed cleaning.
Add Detail: apostrophe for possession
cleaning
needed
windows
The
van's
_______
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Build
The
van's
_______
needed
cleaning
windows
___________________________________________________________________________
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Grandad's Memories
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
Title
Paragraph
Alliteration
Verbs
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Apostrophes to show belonging
Past tense
Similes
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Stations
Pairs
Groups
Memorize the positions
Past tense
Let me show you
Add the missing words to the sentences to make them past tense.
was
were
Grandad holding the photo album.
Grandad and Gramps happy.
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Past tense
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Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.
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Feel
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Past tense
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Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Apostrophes to show belonging
Past tense
Similes
Apostrophes to show belonging
Let me show you
Add the missing apostrophes to show belonging.
's
's
's
1. Grandad camper needed fixing.
2. The sun light was dazzling.
3. The album photos were special.
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Apostrophes to show belonging
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Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.
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Feel
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Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Apostophes to show belonging
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Apostrophes to show belonging
Past tense
Similes
Words and phrases for feelings
Let me show you
Drag the words and phrases that best describe how travelling the world made Grandad feel.
stories of their adventures
adventurous
excited
sky full of sparkling stars
lush valley
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Words and phrases for feelings
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Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?
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Feel
Imagine
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Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases for feelings
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Apostrophes to show belonging
Past tense
Similes
Similes
Let me show you
Match the simile to the image it is describing.
The sheep were as fluffy as clouds.
The stars were like diamonds in the sky.
The sun was shining like gold.
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Similes
Let's find and discuss
Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Similes
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
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Which sentence contains a past tense verb?
Tick one
A He was driving.
B They are happy.
C Grandad is happy.
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Which One's Right?
Which one shows that the camper belonged to Grandad?
B Grandad's camper
A Grandads camper
D Granda'ds camper
C Grandads' camper
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The word 'marvelled' shows how Grandad felt about the sun.
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Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.
A He was driving.
___
adventurous
excited
The sheep were as fluffy as clouds.
The stars were like diamonds in the sky.
The sun was shining like gold.
Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.
Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.
Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.
camper
We
unlocked
the
van
cleaning
needed
windows
The
van's
_______
Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
van
was
The
pink
was
Grandad holding the photo album.
were
Grandad and Gramps happy.
1. Grandad camper needed fixing.
's
2. The sun light was dazzling.
's
3. The album photos were special.
's
Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?
Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?
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Analyse Lesson 6
Can I find and discuss Writer's Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
CVCC
van
was
The
pink
Say, Count, Build, Re-read
Click if correct
Check
The
van
pink
was
My turn to write.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write. Let me say it. Now you write it.
Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentence before I click.
un-
camper
We
unlocked
the
van
Say, Count, Build, Re-read
Click if correct
Check
the
We
camper
van
unlocked
My turn to write.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write. Let me say it. Now you write it.
Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
needed cleaning
Who/What
van
Sentence
The van needed cleaning.
Add Detail: apostrophe for possession
cleaning
needed
windows
The
van's
_______
Re-read
Build
The
van's
_______
needed
cleaning
windows
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer's Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Paragraphs
Title
Alliteration
Verbs
Text structure
Features
Grandad's Memories
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
Title
Paragraph
Alliteration
Verbs
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Apostrophes to show belonging
Past tense
Similes
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Memorize the positions
Past tense
Let me show you
Add the missing words to the sentences to make them past tense.
was
were
Grandad holding the photo album.
Grandad and Gramps happy.
Reveal
Past tense
Let's find and discuss
Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Past tense
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Apostrophes to show belonging
Past tense
Similes
Apostrophes to show belonging
Let me show you
Add the missing apostrophes to show belonging.
's
's
's
1. Grandad camper needed fixing.
2. The sun light was dazzling.
3. The album photos were special.
Reveal
Apostrophes to show belonging
Let's find and discuss
Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Apostophes to show belonging
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Apostrophes to show belonging
Past tense
Similes
Words and phrases for feelings
Let me show you
Drag the words and phrases that best describe how travelling the world made Grandad feel.
stories of their adventures
adventurous
excited
sky full of sparkling stars
lush valley
Reveal
Words and phrases for feelings
Let's find and discuss
Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Imagine
Remove?
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases for feelings
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Apostrophes to show belonging
Past tense
Similes
Similes
Let me show you
Match the simile to the image it is describing.
The sheep were as fluffy as clouds.
The stars were like diamonds in the sky.
The sun was shining like gold.
Reveal
Similes
Let's find and discuss
Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Similes
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Tick Me
Which sentence contains a past tense verb?
Tick one
A He was driving.
B They are happy.
C Grandad is happy.
Check
Which One's Right?
Which one shows that the camper belonged to Grandad?
B Grandad's camper
A Grandads camper
D Granda'ds camper
C Grandads' camper
True or False?
Reveal Text
The word 'marvelled' shows how Grandad felt about the sun.
True
False
Picture Me
Which image best shows this simile?shining like gold
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.
A He was driving.
___
adventurous
excited
The sheep were as fluffy as clouds.
The stars were like diamonds in the sky.
The sun was shining like gold.
Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
Grandad’s eyes were shining when he closed the photo album. I could tell how much he loved those memories of Gramps. Then he grinned and I said it was time to make new adventures. Grandad’s van was old but strong. We cleaned the windows until they gleamed like mirrors. Soon we were trundling along to the beach and my heart felt lighter than ever. So did his. I toasted marshmallows in the brightest bonfire. Grandad played his guitar under a sky full of sparkling stars. We looked up and thought how proud Gramps would have been.
Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.
Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.
camper
We
unlocked
the
van
cleaning
needed
windows
The
van's
_______
Next, Grandad showed me a photo of interesting homes and houses. They saw so many different kinds. Some roofs were pointy and some roofs were flat. Some had huge, glass windows while others were all colours of the rainbow. What amazing places they saw! Soon they saw flats that were taller than towers. What would it be like to live up so high? Some of the houses were as small as Grandad’s camper. Grandad said the best home was their own little van because that is where Gramps was.
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
My grandad lives in the most beautiful cottage. Its walled garden has the tallest sunflowers and climbing pear trees. One morning, I was in the cosy living room when Grandad brought over a big book. It was the special photo album of Grandad’s memories with Gramps in the camper van. How excited he looked! I snuggled up to listen to his stories of their adventures. He was wearing his warmest smile as he gently opened the album. What adventures would he reveal?
van
was
The
pink
was
Grandad holding the photo album.
were
Grandad and Gramps happy.
1. Grandad camper needed fixing.
's
2. The sun light was dazzling.
's
3. The album photos were special.
's
Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?
Many years ago, Grandad and Gramps were driving through a lush valley. The camper van was rumbling along a bumpy road that took them higher and higher into the mountains. First, they saw sheep as fluffy as white clouds. After that, they marvelled at the sun’s light shining like gold above the valley. He told me how adventurous they were feeling. What wonderful journeys they had! Where else might they have gone to explore?