Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a simile poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
-s
had
They
fun
trips
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Click if correct
Check
fun
trips
had
They
My turn to write.
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Which one shall I choose?
Let me say the sentence before I click.
-s -es
They
went
of
on
lots
trips
van
The
needed
washes
few
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Click if correct
Check
trips
on
lots
They
went
of
My turn to write.
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washes
few
van
needed
The
My turn to write.
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Sentence Checker
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Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
went
Who/What
they
Sentence
They went on holidays.
Add Detail: noun phrases
They
went
on
holidays
exciting
_________________________
Re-read
Build
on
holidays
___________
went
exciting
__________
They
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
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Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
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Can I write a simile poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
surfed
snuggle
adventurer
heave
handiwork
bay
Hover for definitions!
packed to the brim
towering skyscrappers
sorry for itself
bonfires
high-rise flats
terraces
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Grandad's Camper.
Drama: Freeze Frame
Illustration 3: Grandad sat by the river while Gramps is on the swing
Illustration 1: Grandad and Gramps having adventures at the beach
Illustration 2: Grandad and Gramps sat in the camper on the beach
My turn to write a simile poem.
Your turn to write a simile poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a simile poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
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Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
They
went
on
holidays
exciting
_________________________
van
The
needed
washes
few
They
went
of
on
lots
trips
had
They
fun
trips
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Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a simile poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
-s
had
They
fun
trips
Say, Count, Build, Re-read
Click if correct
Check
fun
trips
had
They
My turn to write.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write. Let me say it. Now you write it.
Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Which one shall I choose?
Let me say the sentence before I click.
-s -es
They
went
of
on
lots
trips
van
The
needed
washes
few
Say, Count, Build, Re-read
Click if correct
Check
trips
on
lots
They
went
of
My turn to write.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write. Let me say it. Now you write it.
Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Say, Count, Build, Re-read
Click if correct
Check
washes
few
van
needed
The
My turn to write.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write. Let me say it. Now you write it.
Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
went
Who/What
they
Sentence
They went on holidays.
Add Detail: noun phrases
They
went
on
holidays
exciting
_________________________
Re-read
Build
on
holidays
___________
went
exciting
__________
They
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a simile poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
surfed
snuggle
adventurer
heave
handiwork
bay
Hover for definitions!
packed to the brim
towering skyscrappers
sorry for itself
bonfires
high-rise flats
terraces
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Grandad's Camper.
Drama: Freeze Frame
Illustration 3: Grandad sat by the river while Gramps is on the swing
Illustration 1: Grandad and Gramps having adventures at the beach
Illustration 2: Grandad and Gramps sat in the camper on the beach
My turn to write a simile poem.
Your turn to write a simile poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a simile poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
They
went
on
holidays
exciting
_________________________
van
The
needed
washes
few
They
went
of
on
lots
trips
had
They
fun
trips