Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write a bargain speech paragraph?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
have
Who/What
you
Sentence
You have an opportunity.
Add Detail: adverbs
definitely
____________
You
have an opportunity to help your community.
Re-read
Build
Drag the adverbs to alter how likely the event is to happen.
perhaps
__________
definitely
____________
Check
possibly
___________
You
have an opportunity to help your community.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
Sentence
I was broken.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
I was broken; the promise restored me.
______________________
____________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
I was broken the promise restored me.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a bargain speech paragraph?
Roleplay: Bargain Speech
Expression
Pace
Volume
Accuracy
Illustration: the shadows of the thief girl and the woman fighting over the bag.
My turn to write a bargain speech paragraph.
Your turn to write a bargain speech paragraph.
Use your Sentence Checker
Who wants to share?
Effect
Feel
Imagine
Word Choice
Can I write a bargain speech paragraph?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
definitely
____________
You
have an opportunity to help your community.
I was broken; the promise restored me.
______________________
____________
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Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write a bargain speech paragraph?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
have
Who/What
you
Sentence
You have an opportunity.
Add Detail: adverbs
definitely
____________
You
have an opportunity to help your community.
Re-read
Build
Drag the adverbs to alter how likely the event is to happen.
perhaps
__________
definitely
____________
Check
possibly
___________
You
have an opportunity to help your community.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
Sentence
I was broken.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
I was broken; the promise restored me.
______________________
____________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
I was broken the promise restored me.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a bargain speech paragraph?
Roleplay: Bargain Speech
Expression
Pace
Volume
Accuracy
Illustration: the shadows of the thief girl and the woman fighting over the bag.
My turn to write a bargain speech paragraph.
Your turn to write a bargain speech paragraph.
Use your Sentence Checker
Who wants to share?
Effect
Feel
Imagine
Word Choice
Can I write a bargain speech paragraph?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
definitely
____________
You
have an opportunity to help your community.
I was broken; the promise restored me.
______________________
____________