Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write an atmosphere description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
could hope
Who/What
the city
Sentence
The city could hope.
Add Detail: adverbs
surely
_______
The city could
find hope again.
Re-read
Build
Drag the adverbs to alter how likely the event is to happen.
perhaps
__________
surely
_______
Check
possibly
___________
The city could
find hope again.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
are
Subject
her hands
Sentence
Her hands are steady.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
The earth was dry; her hands are steady.
___________________
________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
The earth was dry her hands are steady.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write an atmosphere description?
Vehicle and Example Text Recap
What was the atmosphere like in the Example Text?
What was the mood of the Vehicle Text?
Were they similar or different?
You will be writing your own description of the atmosphere in the story, describing the weather and the character's actions.
Drama: Sculpture
How can you show the atmosphere of the place?
What expression will their face show?
How will their bodies be posed?
How can you show the mood created?
Illustration:The city
My turn to write an atmosphere description.
Your turn to write an atmosphere description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write an atmosphere description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
surely
_______
The city could
find hope again.
The earth was dry; her hands are steady.
___________________
________________
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Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write an atmosphere description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
could hope
Who/What
the city
Sentence
The city could hope.
Add Detail: adverbs
surely
_______
The city could
find hope again.
Re-read
Build
Drag the adverbs to alter how likely the event is to happen.
perhaps
__________
surely
_______
Check
possibly
___________
The city could
find hope again.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
are
Subject
her hands
Sentence
Her hands are steady.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
The earth was dry; her hands are steady.
___________________
________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
The earth was dry her hands are steady.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write an atmosphere description?
Vehicle and Example Text Recap
What was the atmosphere like in the Example Text?
What was the mood of the Vehicle Text?
Were they similar or different?
You will be writing your own description of the atmosphere in the story, describing the weather and the character's actions.
Drama: Sculpture
How can you show the atmosphere of the place?
What expression will their face show?
How will their bodies be posed?
How can you show the mood created?
Illustration:The city
My turn to write an atmosphere description.
Your turn to write an atmosphere description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write an atmosphere description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
surely
_______
The city could
find hope again.
The earth was dry; her hands are steady.
___________________
________________