Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write a complaint paragraph?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
claimed
Who/What
You
Sentence
You claimed it was yours.
Add Detail: conjunctions
we all know it is not.
although
____________
You claimed it was yours
Re-read
Build
You claimed it was yours
we all know it is not.
although
____________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
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Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
said
Who/What
Beetle
Sentence
Beetle said.
Add Detail: speech punctuation
"I am so disappointed."
Beetle said,
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
Beetle said
I am so disappointed
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a complaint paragraph?
Let me read the Example Text again.
A Letter from the Luna Moth
Dear Spider,
I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done. Yours sincerely, Luna Moth
Role on the Wall
Illustration 1:Page beginning 'But as the lines grew longer'.
Say
Do
Think
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a complaint paragraph as the Luna Moth.
Your turn to write a complaint paragraph as the dung beetle.
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Can I write a complaint paragraph?
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Writing Effects
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Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
we all know it is not.
although
____________
You claimed it was yours
"I am so disappointed."
Beetle said,
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Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write a complaint paragraph?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
claimed
Who/What
You
Sentence
You claimed it was yours.
Add Detail: conjunctions
we all know it is not.
although
____________
You claimed it was yours
Re-read
Build
You claimed it was yours
we all know it is not.
although
____________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
said
Who/What
Beetle
Sentence
Beetle said.
Add Detail: speech punctuation
"I am so disappointed."
Beetle said,
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
Beetle said
I am so disappointed
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a complaint paragraph?
Let me read the Example Text again.
A Letter from the Luna Moth
Dear Spider, I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done. Yours sincerely, Luna Moth
Role on the Wall
Illustration 1:Page beginning 'But as the lines grew longer'.
Say
Do
Think
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a complaint paragraph as the Luna Moth.
Your turn to write a complaint paragraph as the dung beetle.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a complaint paragraph?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
we all know it is not.
although
____________
You claimed it was yours
"I am so disappointed."
Beetle said,