Analyse Lesson 5
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
have been
Who/What
You
Sentence
You have been selfish.
Add Detail: present perfect tense
You
such a selfish spider.
have been
______________
Re-read
Build
You
have been
______________
such a selfish spider.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
were
Who/What
They
Sentence
They were unhappy.
Add Detail: was or were?
They
were
_______
very unhappy.
Re-read
Build
They
very unhappy.
were
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Openings and closings
Paragraph
First person
Different tenses
Descriptive words and phrases
Text structure
Features
A Letter from the Luna Moth
Dear Spider,
I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Openings and closings
Descriptive words and phrases
Paragraph
Different tenses
First person
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Prepositions
Present perfect verbs
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Let me show you
a or an?
an
an
garden
unfair rule
argument
problem
Check
a or an?
Let's find and discuss
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
a or an?
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Prepositions
Present perfect verbs
Adverbs
Let me show you
Drag the phrases to put them under the correct type of adverb shown: time (when), place (where), or cause (why).
cause
place
time
Choose two
Choose two
Choose one
see the object there
Firstly, I must say...
Consequently, you will be left...
Check
Somewhere ruled by your greed,
it has now become...
Adverbs
Let's find and discuss
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
Imagine
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Prepositions
Present perfect verbs
Let me show you
Prepositions
Choose a preposition to show time, place or cause for each of the sentences.
because of
at
in
We know you took the object __________ nighttime.
It mysteriously appeared __________ your spiderweb.
I am upset ___________ the unfairness of your actions.
Check
Prepositions
Let's find and discuss
I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Replace?
Feel
Imagine
Remove?
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Prepositions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Prepositions
Present perfect verbs
Present perfect verbs
Let me show you
Check
Simple Past Tense
Present Perfect Tense
You took the object away.
You have given us an excuse.
You gave us an excuse.
You have taken the object away.
We were feeling frustrated.
Your behaviour has been unfair.
Your behaviour was unfair.
We have been feeling frustrated.
Present perfect verbs
Let's find and discuss
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done.
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Present perfect verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
I would usually use 'a' before a word starting with a ...
B vowel
A prefix
C consonant
D capital letter
Tick Me
Where is the adverb?
Tick one
A She is singing.
B The birds are flying.
C The children are playing.
Reveal
D We are waiting outside.
True or False?
Prepositions can show time (when something happens), place (where something happens) or cause (why something happens).
False
True
Which One's Right?Present Perfect Tense
A I am very upset.
B I was very upset.
C I have been very upset.
D I will be very upset.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
We know you took the object __________ nighttime.
at
in
It mysteriously appeared __________ your spiderweb.
because of
I am upset ___________ the unfairness of your actions.
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done.
Yours sincerely, Luna Moth
Dear Spider,
I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for
it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done.
Yours sincerely, Luna Moth
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done.
Yours sincerely, Luna Moth
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
Dear Spider,
I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Dear Spider,
I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
garden
an
unfair rule
argument
an
problem
cause
place
time
Choose two
Choose two
Choose one
Consequently, you will be left...
see the object there
Firstly, I must say...
Somewhere ruled by your greed,
it has now become...
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
You
such a selfish spider.
have been
______________
They
were
_______
very unhappy.
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Analyse Lesson 5
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
have been
Who/What
You
Sentence
You have been selfish.
Add Detail: present perfect tense
You
such a selfish spider.
have been
______________
Re-read
Build
You
have been
______________
such a selfish spider.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
were
Who/What
They
Sentence
They were unhappy.
Add Detail: was or were?
They
were
_______
very unhappy.
Re-read
Build
They
very unhappy.
were
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Openings and closings
Paragraph
First person
Different tenses
Descriptive words and phrases
Text structure
Features
A Letter from the Luna Moth
Dear Spider, I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Openings and closings
Descriptive words and phrases
Paragraph
Different tenses
First person
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Prepositions
Present perfect verbs
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Let me show you
a or an?
an
an
garden
unfair rule
argument
problem
Check
a or an?
Let's find and discuss
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
a or an?
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Prepositions
Present perfect verbs
Adverbs
Let me show you
Drag the phrases to put them under the correct type of adverb shown: time (when), place (where), or cause (why).
cause
place
time
Choose two
Choose two
Choose one
see the object there
Firstly, I must say...
Consequently, you will be left...
Check
Somewhere ruled by your greed,
it has now become...
Adverbs
Let's find and discuss
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
Imagine
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Prepositions
Present perfect verbs
Let me show you
Prepositions
Choose a preposition to show time, place or cause for each of the sentences.
because of
at
in
We know you took the object __________ nighttime.
It mysteriously appeared __________ your spiderweb.
I am upset ___________ the unfairness of your actions.
Check
Prepositions
Let's find and discuss
I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Replace?
Feel
Imagine
Remove?
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Prepositions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Prepositions
Present perfect verbs
Present perfect verbs
Let me show you
Check
Simple Past Tense
Present Perfect Tense
You took the object away.
You have given us an excuse.
You gave us an excuse.
You have taken the object away.
We were feeling frustrated.
Your behaviour has been unfair.
Your behaviour was unfair.
We have been feeling frustrated.
Present perfect verbs
Let's find and discuss
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done.
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Present perfect verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
I would usually use 'a' before a word starting with a ...
B vowel
A prefix
C consonant
D capital letter
Tick Me
Where is the adverb?
Tick one
A She is singing.
B The birds are flying.
C The children are playing.
Reveal
D We are waiting outside.
True or False?
Prepositions can show time (when something happens), place (where something happens) or cause (why something happens).
False
True
Which One's Right?Present Perfect Tense
A I am very upset.
B I was very upset.
C I have been very upset.
D I will be very upset.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
We know you took the object __________ nighttime.
at
in
It mysteriously appeared __________ your spiderweb.
because of
I am upset ___________ the unfairness of your actions.
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done. Yours sincerely, Luna Moth
Dear Spider, I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done. Yours sincerely, Luna Moth
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
I will not return to WonderVille as a result of your actions. I had hoped it would be an inspiring, magical place where many insects gathered to admire something so special. Instead, it has now become somewhere ruled by your greed. Consequently, you will be left with no visitors and no friends if you do not change your behaviour. I hope you realise just how greedy you have been after everything you have done. Yours sincerely, Luna Moth
Another serious problem is your greed. You charged the small fee of a single leaf for us to even see the object there when WonderVille eventually opened. By evening time, you doubled the price while other insects waited in line! You have taken advantage of us. You have taken a beautiful object to make yourself wealthy beyond imagination.
Dear Spider, I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Dear Spider, I am writing this letter to complain about how you have treated the object that fell from the sky. I knew it was a chrysalis and I was amazed by its beauty. I had hoped to spend more time admiring it. I even kept it warm all through the night while I waited for it to hatch. I really wanted to gaze at it under the moonlight with my firefly friends. However, your actions have made that impossible and I am extremely disappointed! Let me tell you why.
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
garden
an
unfair rule
argument
an
problem
cause
place
time
Choose two
Choose two
Choose one
Consequently, you will be left...
see the object there
Firstly, I must say...
Somewhere ruled by your greed,
it has now become...
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
Firstly, I must say how selfish it was of you to claim the object as your own. I feel that this was an unkind and unfair thing for you to do. It landed in the middle of the garden where we all live yet you decided it only belonged to you. You told us it was yours! You span your web like a web of lies.
You
such a selfish spider.
have been
______________
They
were
_______
very unhappy.