Y3D Wisp Write L12

Write Lesson 12

Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Promise Narrative?

Handwriting

Handwriting

palm crouch

thumb push

finger tap

finger lift

R E A D Y

My Turn

Your Turn

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chap

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My Turn

Your Turn

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

lived

Who/What

Idris

Sentence

Idris lived.

Add Detail: prefixes

Idris lived in a small, small world with

discomfort

____

all around.

Re-read

Build

discomfort

____

all around.

Idris lived in a small, small world with

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Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

shifted

Who/What

shadows

Sentence

The shadows shifted.

Add Detail: possessive apostrophe

streets'

__________

The

shadows shifted.

Re-read

Build

The

shadows shifted.

streets'

__________

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Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Promise Narrative?

My turn to write Part 3

plan

writer's voice

Sentence Checker

Working Wall

Watch me use my...

Your turn to write

Use the Sentence Checker

Use the Working Wall

Use your plan

Say before you write

Edit

Add

Re-read

Share, Edit, Review

Effect

Feel

Edit

Imagine

Sentence Choice

Word Choice

Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Promise Narrative?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

Idris lived in a small, small world with

discomfort

____

all around.

streets'

__________

The

shadows shifted.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly. Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side. Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat. Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax. Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards. Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically. Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm. Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.