Analyse Lesson 6
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Verb Prefixes
the truth.
I suggest you read this if you wish to
uncover
___
Re-read
Build
uncover
___
the truth.
Check
I suggest you read this if you wish to
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Subjunctive Form
If I were still young,
____________
I would plant them myself.
Re-read
Build
I would plant them myself.
If I were still young,
____________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Openings and closings
Paragraph
First person
Formal words and phrases
Words and phrases for feelings
Text structure
Features
A Letter to the Wallet Thief
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Openings and closings
Paragraph
Formal words and phrases
Words and phrases for feelings
First person
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show feelings
Addressing the reader
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Commas for parenthesis
Reveal
Let me show you
Drag the extra information between the commas to add the parenthesis.
bulging at the seams
a desperate thief
depressing and futile
This bag, __________________, is full of hope.
Our lives, __________________, could change forever.
You, _______________, can change your shameful ways.
Commas for parenthesis
Let's find and discuss
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Commas for parenthesis
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show feelings
Addressing the reader
Words and phrases to show feelings
Let me show you
Drag the words and phrases that best describe the feelings of the letter writer into the wallet.
disrespected
serene and blissful
lighthearted
got the better of me
bubbling with happiness
Reveal
Words and phrases to show feelings
Let's find and discuss
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases to show feelings
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show feelings
Addressing the reader
Let me show you
Addressing the reader
Swap the ways to address the reader to see how it avoids repetition.
wallet thief
desperate thief
dear reader
I would say that you probably don't feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, _____________, but all actions have consequences ________________.
Addressing the reader
Let's find and discuss
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Addressing the reader
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
Words and phrases to show feelings
Commas for parenthesis
Addressing the reader
Let me show you
Fronted Adverbials
Place a comma after each fronted adverbial.
Looking to the future our community can finally move on.
If you reflect the path that you choose matters.
In our bleak city our lives could change forever.
Reveal
Fronted Adverbials
Let's find and discuss
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Fronted Adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Commas for parenthesis
Which One's Right?
A The community, living in fear can finally, move on.
B The community living, in fear can, finally move on.
C The, community living in, fear can finally move on.
D The community, living in fear, can finally move on.
Yes or No?Do they show feelings?
A ...the good deep in your heart...
Yes
B ...atone for your actions...
No
C To whoever may find this note,
Check
True or False?
The writer addresses the reader in different ways to make them feel surprised, think about their actions, and understand that their choices matter.
True
False
Odd One Out
Which one is not a fronted adverbial to show time?
B After you took it,
A Eventually,
C In this city,
D In the morning,
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next.
Yours,
Someone who hopes you will do better
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next.
Yours,
Someone who hopes you will do better
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
the truth.
I suggest you read this if you wish to
uncover
___
If I were still young,
____________
I would plant them myself.
WHEN
Looking to the future, our community can finally move on.
HOW
If you reflect, the path that you choose matters.
WHERE
In our bleak city, our lives could change forever.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next.
Yours,
Someone who hopes you will do better
This bag, __________________, is full of hope.
bulging at the seams
depressing and futile
Our lives, __________________, could change forever.
a desperate thief
You, _______________, can change your shameful ways.
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next.
Yours,
Someone who hopes you will do better
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
disrespected
got the better of me
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
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Analyse Lesson 6
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Verb Prefixes
the truth.
I suggest you read this if you wish to
uncover
___
Re-read
Build
uncover
___
the truth.
Check
I suggest you read this if you wish to
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Subjunctive Form
If I were still young,
____________
I would plant them myself.
Re-read
Build
I would plant them myself.
If I were still young,
____________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Openings and closings
Paragraph
First person
Formal words and phrases
Words and phrases for feelings
Text structure
Features
A Letter to the Wallet Thief
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Openings and closings
Paragraph
Formal words and phrases
Words and phrases for feelings
First person
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show feelings
Addressing the reader
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Commas for parenthesis
Reveal
Let me show you
Drag the extra information between the commas to add the parenthesis.
bulging at the seams
a desperate thief
depressing and futile
This bag, __________________, is full of hope.
Our lives, __________________, could change forever.
You, _______________, can change your shameful ways.
Commas for parenthesis
Let's find and discuss
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Commas for parenthesis
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show feelings
Addressing the reader
Words and phrases to show feelings
Let me show you
Drag the words and phrases that best describe the feelings of the letter writer into the wallet.
disrespected
serene and blissful
lighthearted
got the better of me
bubbling with happiness
Reveal
Words and phrases to show feelings
Let's find and discuss
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases to show feelings
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show feelings
Addressing the reader
Let me show you
Addressing the reader
Swap the ways to address the reader to see how it avoids repetition.
wallet thief
desperate thief
dear reader
I would say that you probably don't feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, _____________, but all actions have consequences ________________.
Addressing the reader
Let's find and discuss
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Addressing the reader
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
Words and phrases to show feelings
Commas for parenthesis
Addressing the reader
Let me show you
Fronted Adverbials
Place a comma after each fronted adverbial.
Looking to the future our community can finally move on.
If you reflect the path that you choose matters.
In our bleak city our lives could change forever.
Reveal
Fronted Adverbials
Let's find and discuss
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Fronted Adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Commas for parenthesis
Which One's Right?
A The community, living in fear can finally, move on.
B The community living, in fear can, finally move on.
C The, community living in, fear can finally move on.
D The community, living in fear, can finally move on.
Yes or No?Do they show feelings?
A ...the good deep in your heart...
Yes
B ...atone for your actions...
No
C To whoever may find this note,
Check
True or False?
The writer addresses the reader in different ways to make them feel surprised, think about their actions, and understand that their choices matter.
True
False
Odd One Out
Which one is not a fronted adverbial to show time?
B After you took it,
A Eventually,
C In this city,
D In the morning,
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
the truth.
I suggest you read this if you wish to
uncover
___
If I were still young,
____________
I would plant them myself.
WHEN
Looking to the future, our community can finally move on.
HOW
If you reflect, the path that you choose matters.
WHERE
In our bleak city, our lives could change forever.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better
This bag, __________________, is full of hope.
bulging at the seams
depressing and futile
Our lives, __________________, could change forever.
a desperate thief
You, _______________, can change your shameful ways.
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
disrespected
got the better of me
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.