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Analyse Lesson 5

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Let me say the sentence before I click.

Commas for Parenthesis

torn from my hands

,_______________,

the chance for hope awaits

Within this bag

Re-read

Build

the chance for hope awaits

Within this bag

torn from my hands

,_______________,

Check

___________________________________________________________________________

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Formal or Informal Speech Structures

Let me say the sentences before I click.

don't know what those seeds will do, do you?"

_______________________________________________________

she asked.

______

"You

"You

she warned.

_________

cannot comprehend the power they hold,"

_________________________________________________

Re-read

Build

Drag the formal or informal vocabulary to alter the formality.

cannot comprehend the power they hold,"

_________________________________________________

she warned.

_________

she asked.

______

Check

don't know what those seeds will do, do you?"

_______________________________________________________

"You

___________________________________________________________________________

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has

The Example Text has...

Openings and closings

Paragraph

First person

Formal words and phrases

Words and phrases for feelings

Text structure

Features

A Letter to the Wallet Thief

To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.

Openings and closings

Paragraph

Formal words and phrases

Words and phrases for feelings

First person

Click on Click off

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

Writer's Knowledge

Adverbs

Verb Prefixes

Modal Verbs

Adverbials

Let's work in:

Stations
Pairs
Groups

Memorize the positions

Let me show you

Verb prefixes

Try adding the prefixes to the verbs to see if they make new words.

Prefix
Verb
over-
un-
do
step
de-
dis-
re-
mis-
appear
Reveal

Verb prefixes

Let's find and discuss

To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Verb prefixes

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Adverbs

Verb Prefixes

Modal Verbs

Adverbials

Let me show you

Modal Verbs

Click the modal verbs to change how likely the reader is to be persuaded.

ought to

will

may

ought to

will

In the future, you __________ look back remorsefully.

may

ought to

will

Your choice __________ change our lives forever.

may

ought to

will

You ___________ plant the acorns.

may

Modal Verbs

Let's find and discuss

Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.

Reveal

Replace?

Feel

Remove?

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Modal Verbs

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Adverbs

Verb Prefixes

Modal Verbs

Adverbials

Memorize the positions

Adverbs

Let me show you

Let's order the adverbs from most to least likely to happen.

undoubtedly
maybe
surely
perhaps
possibly
clearly
probably
certainly
obviously
Most likely
Least likely

You _________ don't feel a shred of doubt.

Adverbs

Let's find and discuss

If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better

Reveal

Replace?

Feel

Imagine

Remove?

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Adverbs

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Adverbs

Verb Prefixes

Modal Verbs

Adverbials

Reveal

Adverbials

Let me show you

Drag the adverbials into the passage to help it flow.

until this very moment

Moving forwards

Now,

For a long time

____ you hold in your hands what was mine and I cannot help but feel a mix of anger and disbelief. ____________ I have carried this wallet with me, through every crowded street and quiet alley, never imagining it would be taken. I had believed it would remain safe, tucked away, __________________. ______________, if you choose to make amends, perhaps there is still a chance to restore what has been lost.

Adverbials

Let's find and discuss

Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.

Reveal

Replace?

Feel

Remove?

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Adverbials

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Question Quiz Time

Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up

Odd One Out

Which is not a verb prefix?

B mis-

A over-

C ly-

D de-

Tick Me

Tick the modal verbs. Tick two.

A must

B plant

C should

Check

D actions

True or False?

Adverbs can be used to show how possible something is.

False
True

Which One's Right?

A Adverbials are words or phrases which are useful to keep the writing neatly contained in one paragraph.

B Adverbials are words or phrases which are useful to keep the writing flowing, creating cohesion in and across paragraphs.

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

unstep
overstep
destep
disstep
restep
misstep

To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.

____ you hold in your hands what was mine and I cannot help but feel a mix of anger and disbelief. ____________ I have carried this wallet with me, through every crowded street and quiet alley, never imagining it would be taken. I had believed it would remain safe, tucked away, __________________. ______________, if you choose to make amends, perhaps there is still a chance to restore what has been lost.

Now,

For a long time

until this very moment

Moving forwards

If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better

To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.

If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better

unappear
overappear
deappear
disappear
reappear
misappear

Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.

Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.

Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.

torn from my hands

,_______________,

the chance for hope awaits

Within this bag

To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.

Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.

Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.

overdo
undo
dedo
disdo
redo
misdo

don't know what those seeds will do, do you?"

_______________________________________________________

she asked.

______

"You

"You

she warned.

_________

cannot comprehend the power they hold,"

_________________________________________________

Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.

If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better