Analyse Lesson 5
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
awaits
Who/What
hope
Sentence
Hope awaits.
Add Detail: commas for parenthesis
torn from my hands
, _______________,
the chance for hope awaits.
Within this bag
Re-read
Build
torn from my hands
, _______________,
Within this bag
Check
the chance for hope awaits.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
cannot comprehend
Subject
you
Sentence
You cannot comprehend.
Add Detail: formal or informal speech
"You
don't know what those seeds will do, do you?"
_______________________________________________________
she asked.
______
she warned.
_________
"You
cannot comprehend the power they hold,"
_________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
"You
don't know what those seeds will do, do you?"
_______________________________________________________
she asked.
______
___________________________________________________________________________
she warned.
_________
"You
cannot comprehend the power they hold,"
_________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Openings and closings
Paragraph
First person
Words and phrases for feelings
Formal words and phrases
Text structure
Features
A Letter to the Wallet Thief
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Openings and closings
Paragraph
Formal words and phrases
Words and phrases for feelings
First person
Click on Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Modal Verbs
Adverbials
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Memorize the positions
Let me show you
Verb prefixes
Try adding the prefixes to the verbs to see if they make new words.
Prefix
Verb
over-
un-
do
step
de-
dis-
re-
mis-
appear
Reveal
Verb prefixes
Let's find and discuss
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Verb prefixes
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Modal Verbs
Adverbials
Let me show you
Modal Verbs
Click the modal verbs to change how likely the reader is to be persuaded.
ought to
will
may
ought to
will
In the future, you __________ look back remorsefully.
may
ought to
will
Your choice __________ change our lives forever.
may
ought to
will
You ___________ plant the acorns.
may
Modal Verbs
Let's find and discuss
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Modal Verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Modal Verbs
Adverbials
Memorize the positions
Adverbs
Let me show you
Let's order the adverbs from most to least likely to happen.
undoubtedly
maybe
surely
perhaps
possibly
clearly
probably
certainly
obviously
Most likely
Least likely
You _________ don't feel a shred of doubt.
Adverbs
Let's find and discuss
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next.
Yours,
Someone who hopes you will do better
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Imagine
Remove?
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Modal Verbs
Adverbials
Reveal
Adverbials
Let me show you
Drag the adverbials into the passage to help it flow.
until this very moment
Moving forwards
Now,
For a long time
____ you hold in your hands what was mine and I cannot help but feel a mix of anger and disbelief. ____________ I have carried this wallet with me, through every crowded street and quiet alley, never imagining it would be taken. I had believed it would remain safe, tucked away, __________________. ______________, if you choose to make amends, perhaps there is still a chance to restore what has been lost.
Adverbials
Let's find and discuss
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Odd One Out
Which is not a verb prefix?
B mis-
A over-
C ly-
D de-
Tick Me
Tick the modal verbs. Tick two.
A must
B plant
C should
Check
D actions
True or False?
Adverbs can be used to show how possible something is.
False
True
Which One's Right?
A Adverbials are words or phrases which are useful to keep the writing neatly contained in one paragraph.
B Adverbials are words or phrases which are useful to keep the writing flowing, creating cohesion in and across paragraphs.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
unstep
overstep
destep
disstep
restep
misstep
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
____ you hold in your hands what was mine and I cannot help but feel a mix of anger and disbelief. ____________ I have carried this wallet with me, through every crowded street and quiet alley, never imagining it would be taken. I had believed it would remain safe, tucked away, __________________. ______________, if you choose to make amends, perhaps there is still a chance to restore what has been lost.
Now,
For a long time
until this very moment
Moving forwards
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next.
Yours,
Someone who hopes you will do better
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next.
Yours,
Someone who hopes you will do better
unappear
overappear
deappear
disappear
reappear
misappear
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
torn from my hands
, _______________,
the chance for hope awaits.
Within this bag
To whoever may find this note,
If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
overdo
undo
dedo
disdo
redo
misdo
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next.
Yours,
Someone who hopes you will do better
"You
don't know what those seeds will do, do you?"
_______________________________________________________
she asked.
______
INFORMAL
she warned.
_________
"You
cannot comprehend the power they hold,"
_________________________________________________
FORMAL
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Analyse Lesson 5
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
awaits
Who/What
hope
Sentence
Hope awaits.
Add Detail: commas for parenthesis
torn from my hands
, _______________,
the chance for hope awaits.
Within this bag
Re-read
Build
torn from my hands
, _______________,
Within this bag
Check
the chance for hope awaits.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
cannot comprehend
Subject
you
Sentence
You cannot comprehend.
Add Detail: formal or informal speech
"You
don't know what those seeds will do, do you?"
_______________________________________________________
she asked.
______
she warned.
_________
"You
cannot comprehend the power they hold,"
_________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
"You
don't know what those seeds will do, do you?"
_______________________________________________________
she asked.
______
___________________________________________________________________________
she warned.
_________
"You
cannot comprehend the power they hold,"
_________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Openings and closings
Paragraph
First person
Words and phrases for feelings
Formal words and phrases
Text structure
Features
A Letter to the Wallet Thief
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Openings and closings
Paragraph
Formal words and phrases
Words and phrases for feelings
First person
Click on Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Modal Verbs
Adverbials
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Memorize the positions
Let me show you
Verb prefixes
Try adding the prefixes to the verbs to see if they make new words.
Prefix
Verb
over-
un-
do
step
de-
dis-
re-
mis-
appear
Reveal
Verb prefixes
Let's find and discuss
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Verb prefixes
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Modal Verbs
Adverbials
Let me show you
Modal Verbs
Click the modal verbs to change how likely the reader is to be persuaded.
ought to
will
may
ought to
will
In the future, you __________ look back remorsefully.
may
ought to
will
Your choice __________ change our lives forever.
may
ought to
will
You ___________ plant the acorns.
may
Modal Verbs
Let's find and discuss
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Modal Verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Modal Verbs
Adverbials
Memorize the positions
Adverbs
Let me show you
Let's order the adverbs from most to least likely to happen.
undoubtedly
maybe
surely
perhaps
possibly
clearly
probably
certainly
obviously
Most likely
Least likely
You _________ don't feel a shred of doubt.
Adverbs
Let's find and discuss
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Imagine
Remove?
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Modal Verbs
Adverbials
Reveal
Adverbials
Let me show you
Drag the adverbials into the passage to help it flow.
until this very moment
Moving forwards
Now,
For a long time
____ you hold in your hands what was mine and I cannot help but feel a mix of anger and disbelief. ____________ I have carried this wallet with me, through every crowded street and quiet alley, never imagining it would be taken. I had believed it would remain safe, tucked away, __________________. ______________, if you choose to make amends, perhaps there is still a chance to restore what has been lost.
Adverbials
Let's find and discuss
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Odd One Out
Which is not a verb prefix?
B mis-
A over-
C ly-
D de-
Tick Me
Tick the modal verbs. Tick two.
A must
B plant
C should
Check
D actions
True or False?
Adverbs can be used to show how possible something is.
False
True
Which One's Right?
A Adverbials are words or phrases which are useful to keep the writing neatly contained in one paragraph.
B Adverbials are words or phrases which are useful to keep the writing flowing, creating cohesion in and across paragraphs.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
unstep
overstep
destep
disstep
restep
misstep
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
____ you hold in your hands what was mine and I cannot help but feel a mix of anger and disbelief. ____________ I have carried this wallet with me, through every crowded street and quiet alley, never imagining it would be taken. I had believed it would remain safe, tucked away, __________________. ______________, if you choose to make amends, perhaps there is still a chance to restore what has been lost.
Now,
For a long time
until this very moment
Moving forwards
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better
unappear
overappear
deappear
disappear
reappear
misappear
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
torn from my hands
, _______________,
the chance for hope awaits.
Within this bag
To whoever may find this note, If you are in possession of this wallet, that can only mean that you are a desperate thief who thinks they have got the better of me. You have misjudged your target and certainly disrespected a member of your own community. I would say that you probably don’t feel even a shred of shame for your thoughtless actions, dear reader, but all actions have consequences.
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
Admittedly, you must be a reasonably good pickpocket, as my wallet was particularly well hidden. I have been commuting on the same gruesome journey in this desolate city for more than forty years, to and from work each day, and it has always been with me. Until today… now you have relieved me of it. I always knew you would come and this is why you have found my letter inside.
overdo
undo
dedo
disdo
redo
misdo
Therefore, wallet thief, I will strike a bargain with you. If you desire to keep my wallet, then so be it. However, if you do choose this, you must promise to never steal again. Never. Not even for penny sweets. What lies here, in the pockets of this pouch, is everything the city needs for the richest life of wealth and happiness. Take the money and do good with it.
If you hold up your end of the bargain, you shall relearn the value of giving and sharing. If you choose wisely, I know that you too will surely find happiness. There is so much more to this world than you see, waiting to be rebuilt again as it once was. As a community, we have much to overcome and achieve, yet the change can begin with you. All it takes lies within your hands, and what you choose to do next. Yours, Someone who hopes you will do better
"You
don't know what those seeds will do, do you?"
_______________________________________________________
she asked.
______
INFORMAL
she warned.
_________
"You
cannot comprehend the power they hold,"
_________________________________________________
FORMAL