Immerse Lesson 1
Can I write a prediction about a story?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
When?
How?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
What?
Who?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Reveal
Explore and Respond: Vehicle Text Illustrations
What might the characters be like?
What is your impression of the city?
Illustration: The city
Nothing grew. Everything was broken. No one ever smiled.
Can I write a prediction about this story?
I predict that ...
I think ...
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
had seen
Who/What
he
Sentence
He had seen a place.
Add Detail: adverbs
Perhaps
___________
he had never seen a place so desolate.
Re-read
Build
Drag the adverbs to alter how likely the event is to happen.
Surely
_________
Perhaps
___________
Check
Maybe
__________
he had never seen a place so desolate.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
helped
Subject
she
Sentence
She helped.
Add Detail: formal or informal vocabulary
She helped the city to live again.
___________________________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
restored life to the forgotten city.
________________________________________
She
___________________________________________________________________________
helped the city to live again.
___________________________________
She
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a prediction about a story?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
Perhaps
___________
he had never seen a place so desolate.
restored life to the forgotten city.
________________________________________
She
FORMAL
helped the city to live again.
___________________________________
She
INFORMAL
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Immerse Lesson 1
Can I write a prediction about a story?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
When?
How?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
What?
Who?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Reveal
Explore and Respond: Vehicle Text Illustrations
What might the characters be like?
What is your impression of the city?
Illustration: The city
Nothing grew. Everything was broken. No one ever smiled.
Can I write a prediction about this story?
I predict that ...
I think ...
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
had seen
Who/What
he
Sentence
He had seen a place.
Add Detail: adverbs
Perhaps
___________
he had never seen a place so desolate.
Re-read
Build
Drag the adverbs to alter how likely the event is to happen.
Surely
_________
Perhaps
___________
Check
Maybe
__________
he had never seen a place so desolate.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
helped
Subject
she
Sentence
She helped.
Add Detail: formal or informal vocabulary
She helped the city to live again.
___________________________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
restored life to the forgotten city.
________________________________________
She
___________________________________________________________________________
helped the city to live again.
___________________________________
She
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a prediction about a story?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
Perhaps
___________
he had never seen a place so desolate.
restored life to the forgotten city.
________________________________________
She
FORMAL
helped the city to live again.
___________________________________
She
INFORMAL