Immerse Lesson 2
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentences before I choose one.
a or an?
__
tale of woe
Does this need to be
end-less story would be such a tragedy
An
____
Re-read
Build
Does this need to be
tale of woe
__
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
end-less story would be such a tragedy
An
____
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentences before I choose one.
Plural or Possessive?
the feelings of
the story characters
Nobody considered
______________________
feelings
the story character's
Nobody considered
______________________
feelings
the story characters'
Nobody considered
______________________
Re-read
Build
Nobody considered
the story character's
______________________
feelings
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
the story characters'
______________________
Nobody considered
feelings
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I gather ideas for my persuasive letter?
Let me read the Example Text again
A Letter for Parents and Carers
Dear Parents and Carers,
Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic.
Yours faithfully,
The Story Enders
Story Time with Younger Pupils
What if that was the end of the story?
How?
I think...
Is?
I'm...
I feel...
Why?
Gathering Ideas
Which story did you share with the younger pupils?
What were the listener reactions to the happy ending?
Gathering ideas from listener reactions
Which words and phrases did the listeners use?
What were the listener reactions to the sad ending?
Can I gather ideas for my persuasive letter?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
__
tale of woe
Does this need to be
feelings
the story character's
Nobody considered
______________________
An
___
end-less story would be such a tragedy
feelings
the story characters'
Nobody considered
______________________
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Immerse Lesson 2
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentences before I choose one.
a or an?
__
tale of woe
Does this need to be
end-less story would be such a tragedy
An
____
Re-read
Build
Does this need to be
tale of woe
__
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
end-less story would be such a tragedy
An
____
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentences before I choose one.
Plural or Possessive?
the feelings of
the story characters
Nobody considered
______________________
feelings
the story character's
Nobody considered
______________________
feelings
the story characters'
Nobody considered
______________________
Re-read
Build
Nobody considered
the story character's
______________________
feelings
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
the story characters'
______________________
Nobody considered
feelings
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I gather ideas for my persuasive letter?
Let me read the Example Text again
A Letter for Parents and Carers
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Story Time with Younger Pupils
What if that was the end of the story?
How?
I think...
Is?
I'm...
I feel...
Why?
Gathering Ideas
Which story did you share with the younger pupils?
What were the listener reactions to the happy ending?
Gathering ideas from listener reactions
Which words and phrases did the listeners use?
What were the listener reactions to the sad ending?
Can I gather ideas for my persuasive letter?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
__
tale of woe
Does this need to be
feelings
the story character's
Nobody considered
______________________
An
___
end-less story would be such a tragedy
feelings
the story characters'
Nobody considered
______________________