Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
cried
Who/What
she
Sentence
She cried.
Add Detail: inverted commas
"I just want to go home,"
she cried.
Re-read
Build
"I just want to go home,"
she cried.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
cried
Who/What
he
Sentence
He cried.
Add Detail: speech punctuation
he cried.
"Tell me it isn't so!"
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
Tell me it isn't so
he cried
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Who?
Where?
What?
Let's recap the Vehicle and Example Text villains
Why?
When?
How?
Describing the Traditional Tale Villain Characters
Does their behaviour help us to understand them?
How do you know the villain is unkind?
What might their inner thoughts be?
Does their appearance help us to understand them?
What does the villain want?
What might the villain say?
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
"I just want to go home,"
she cried.
he cried.
"Tell me it isn't so!"
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Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
cried
Who/What
she
Sentence
She cried.
Add Detail: inverted commas
"I just want to go home,"
she cried.
Re-read
Build
"I just want to go home,"
she cried.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
cried
Who/What
he
Sentence
He cried.
Add Detail: speech punctuation
he cried.
"Tell me it isn't so!"
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
Tell me it isn't so
he cried
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Who?
Where?
What?
Let's recap the Vehicle and Example Text villains
Why?
When?
How?
Describing the Traditional Tale Villain Characters
Does their behaviour help us to understand them?
How do you know the villain is unkind?
What might their inner thoughts be?
Does their appearance help us to understand them?
What does the villain want?
What might the villain say?
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
"I just want to go home,"
she cried.
he cried.
"Tell me it isn't so!"