Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Which one shall I choose?
Adverbs
already
It was
far too late
________
She tried and failed to get
away
_____
of all those evil plans
The villain had won
as a result
___________
Re-read
Build
far too late
It was
already
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
She tried and failed to get
away
_____
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
of all those evil plans
as a result
___________
The villain had won
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Which one shall I choose?
Fronted Adverbials
they saw an enormous oven
In the kitchen,
______________
the door creaked open
Slowly,
_______
At night,
the stars whispered to themselves
________
Re-read
Build
they saw an enormous oven
In the kitchen,
______________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
the door creaked open
Slowly,
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
the stars whispered to themselves
At night,
________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read The Lost Happy Endings up to '...scattering bitter tears into the cold black night'.
A Surprise Delivery!
What?
Who?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
veiny
illuminating
disdain
withered
Hover for definitions!
deceit
lurching
anguished
crooned
Hover for definitions!
crippling grief
a sense of unease
the ugliness of envy
grateful wonderment
averting her gaze
exhaled in approval
Let me read the Example Text
The Queen and The Apple
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her. Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple. Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The Queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought. “No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
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Which words tell us that the weather was sunny and bright outside the cottage?
Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door.
illuminating
sunlight
Match Me
Reveal Text
Match the descriptions of Snow White and the Queen when they are first introduced.
evil, jealous
loveliness
warm smile
sly smile
Check
Tick Me
Reveal Text
It says the Queen 'cunningly crooned' when she greets Snow White. What does this tell you about the Queen's character? Tick two.
A She is deceitful and devious.
B She is kind and warm.
C She is manipulative and plotting.
Check
D She is sweet and thoughtful.
Picture Me
Reveal Text
The text says that it had been a ‘busy morning’ for Snow White. Which is the best match for the setting before she ‘completed the tidying’?
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
At night,
the stars whispered to themselves
________
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door.
the door creaked open
Slowly,
_______
She tried and failed to get
away
_____
loveliness
sly smile
warm smile
evil, jealous
of all those evil plans
as a result
The villain had won
___________
they saw an enormous oven
In the kitchen,
______________
Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face.
far too late
already
It was
_______
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her.
Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit.
“Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple.
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Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Which one shall I choose?
Adverbs
already
It was
far too late
________
She tried and failed to get
away
_____
of all those evil plans
The villain had won
as a result
___________
Re-read
Build
far too late
It was
already
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
She tried and failed to get
away
_____
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
of all those evil plans
as a result
___________
The villain had won
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Which one shall I choose?
Fronted Adverbials
they saw an enormous oven
In the kitchen,
______________
the door creaked open
Slowly,
_______
At night,
the stars whispered to themselves
________
Re-read
Build
they saw an enormous oven
In the kitchen,
______________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
the door creaked open
Slowly,
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
the stars whispered to themselves
At night,
________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read The Lost Happy Endings up to '...scattering bitter tears into the cold black night'.
A Surprise Delivery!
What?
Who?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
veiny
illuminating
disdain
withered
Hover for definitions!
deceit
lurching
anguished
crooned
Hover for definitions!
crippling grief
a sense of unease
the ugliness of envy
grateful wonderment
averting her gaze
exhaled in approval
Let me read the Example Text
The Queen and The Apple
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her. Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple. Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The Queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought. “No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Find Me
Which words tell us that the weather was sunny and bright outside the cottage?
Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door.
illuminating
sunlight
Match Me
Reveal Text
Match the descriptions of Snow White and the Queen when they are first introduced.
evil, jealous
loveliness
warm smile
sly smile
Check
Tick Me
Reveal Text
It says the Queen 'cunningly crooned' when she greets Snow White. What does this tell you about the Queen's character? Tick two.
A She is deceitful and devious.
B She is kind and warm.
C She is manipulative and plotting.
Check
D She is sweet and thoughtful.
Picture Me
Reveal Text
The text says that it had been a ‘busy morning’ for Snow White. Which is the best match for the setting before she ‘completed the tidying’?
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
At night,
the stars whispered to themselves
________
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door.
the door creaked open
Slowly,
_______
She tried and failed to get
away
_____
loveliness
sly smile
warm smile
evil, jealous
of all those evil plans
as a result
The villain had won
___________
they saw an enormous oven
In the kitchen,
______________
Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face.
far too late
already
It was
_______
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her. Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple.