Immerse Lesson 3
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
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chap
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My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
it
Sentence
It was late.
Add Detail: adverbs
It was
far too late.
already
__________
Re-read
Build
It was
already
__________
far too late.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
whispered
Who/What
stars
Sentence
The stars whispered.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
At night,
the stars whispered to themselves.
___________
Re-read
Build
At night,
___________
the stars whispered to themselves.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read The Lost Happy Endings up to '...scattering bitter tears into the cold black night'.
A Surprise Delivery!
What?
Who?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
veiny
illuminating
disdain
withered
Hover for definitions!
deceit
lurching
anguished
crooned
Hover for definitions!
crippling grief
a sense of unease
the ugliness of envy
grateful wonderment
averting her gaze
exhaled in approval
Let me read the Example Text
The Queen and The Apple
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her. Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple. Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The Queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought. “No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Find Me
Which words tell us that the weather was sunny and bright outside the cottage?
Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door.
Check
Match Me
Reveal Text
Match the descriptions of Snow White and the Queen when they are first introduced.
loveliness
evil, jealous
warm smile
sly smile
Check
Tick Me
It says the Queen 'cunningly crooned' when she greets Snow White. What does this tell you about the Queen's character?
Tick two.
A She is deceitful and devious.
B She is kind and warm.
C She is manipulative and plotting.
Check
D She is sweet and thoughtful.
Picture Me
The text says that it had been a ‘busy morning’ for Snow White. Which is the best match for the setting before she ‘completed the tidying’?
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
At night,
the stars whispered to themselves.
___________
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
It was
far too late.
already
__________
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly.
Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side.
Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat.
Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax.
Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards.
Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically.
Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm.
Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
A She is deceitful and devious.
C She is manipulative and plotting.
Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
loveliness
sly smile
warm smile
evil, jealous
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.
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Immerse Lesson 3
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
__________________________________________________________________________________________
chap
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
it
Sentence
It was late.
Add Detail: adverbs
It was
far too late.
already
__________
Re-read
Build
It was
already
__________
far too late.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
whispered
Who/What
stars
Sentence
The stars whispered.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
At night,
the stars whispered to themselves.
___________
Re-read
Build
At night,
___________
the stars whispered to themselves.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read The Lost Happy Endings up to '...scattering bitter tears into the cold black night'.
A Surprise Delivery!
What?
Who?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
veiny
illuminating
disdain
withered
Hover for definitions!
deceit
lurching
anguished
crooned
Hover for definitions!
crippling grief
a sense of unease
the ugliness of envy
grateful wonderment
averting her gaze
exhaled in approval
Let me read the Example Text
The Queen and The Apple
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her. Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple. Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The Queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought. “No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Find Me
Which words tell us that the weather was sunny and bright outside the cottage?
Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door.
Check
Match Me
Reveal Text
Match the descriptions of Snow White and the Queen when they are first introduced.
loveliness
evil, jealous
warm smile
sly smile
Check
Tick Me
It says the Queen 'cunningly crooned' when she greets Snow White. What does this tell you about the Queen's character?
Tick two.
A She is deceitful and devious.
B She is kind and warm.
C She is manipulative and plotting.
Check
D She is sweet and thoughtful.
Picture Me
The text says that it had been a ‘busy morning’ for Snow White. Which is the best match for the setting before she ‘completed the tidying’?
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
At night,
the stars whispered to themselves.
___________
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
It was
far too late.
already
__________
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly. Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side. Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat. Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax. Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards. Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically. Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm. Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
A She is deceitful and devious.
C She is manipulative and plotting.
Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
loveliness
sly smile
warm smile
evil, jealous
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.