Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a character poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
knew
Who/What
she
Sentence
She knew.
Add Detail: conjunctions
she thought up a cunning plan.
She knew exactly what to do
after
_______
Re-read
Build
she thought up a cunning plan.
after
_______
She knew exactly what to do
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
spotted
Who/What
they
Sentence
They spotted a house.
Add Detail: noun phrase
They spotted
an inviting gingerbread house in a shady clearing.
_______________________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
They spotted
an inviting gingerbread house in a shady clearing.
_______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
fumbling
kindling
skimmed
vicious
Hover for definitions!
lair
agog
tipple
hideously
violet evening air
living frisbees
dusk was removing the outline of things
scarves of mist draped
faster than fury
bushes crouched in the fog
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read the first 3 pages of The Lost Happy Endings up to '...all ready for Jub to collect once again'.
Explore and Respond: Vehicle Text Illustration
What kind of character do you think she is?
Does she remind you of any other characters?
What can you tell about her?
What do you notice about Jub?
How is she similar to other good characters?
Illustration:Jub in her cosy hole in the tree
Describing Traditional Tale Characters
What do they do?
What do you recognise?
How do they behave?
What do they look like?
My turn to write a character poem.
Your turn to write a character poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
They spotted
an inviting gingerbread house in a shady clearing.
_______________________________________________________________
she thought up a cunning plan.
She knew exactly what to do
after
_______
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Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a character poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
knew
Who/What
she
Sentence
She knew.
Add Detail: conjunctions
she thought up a cunning plan.
She knew exactly what to do
after
_______
Re-read
Build
she thought up a cunning plan.
after
_______
She knew exactly what to do
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
spotted
Who/What
they
Sentence
They spotted a house.
Add Detail: noun phrase
They spotted
an inviting gingerbread house in a shady clearing.
_______________________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
They spotted
an inviting gingerbread house in a shady clearing.
_______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
fumbling
kindling
skimmed
vicious
Hover for definitions!
lair
agog
tipple
hideously
violet evening air
living frisbees
dusk was removing the outline of things
scarves of mist draped
faster than fury
bushes crouched in the fog
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read the first 3 pages of The Lost Happy Endings up to '...all ready for Jub to collect once again'.
Explore and Respond: Vehicle Text Illustration
What kind of character do you think she is?
Does she remind you of any other characters?
What can you tell about her?
What do you notice about Jub?
How is she similar to other good characters?
Illustration:Jub in her cosy hole in the tree
Describing Traditional Tale Characters
What do they do?
What do you recognise?
How do they behave?
What do they look like?
My turn to write a character poem.
Your turn to write a character poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
They spotted
an inviting gingerbread house in a shady clearing.
_______________________________________________________________
she thought up a cunning plan.
She knew exactly what to do
after
_______