Immerse Lesson 1
Can I write predictions about a story?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
When?
How?
Let's read the Vehicle Text Extract
What could the similes be suggesting?
What is happening to the 'endings'?
How do you know?
What might the story be about?
Explore and Respond: Vehicle Text Illustration
Illustration: Jub sitting on a tree branch
Can I write predictions about a story?
I think ... because ...
I predict that ...
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
grinned
Who/What
he
Sentence
He grinned.
Add Detail: a or an?
Which one shall I choose?
He grinned at her with
slyness in his eyes.
__
an
She let out
evil, terrible laugh.
___
Re-read
Build
slyness in his eyes.
__
He grinned at her with
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
evil, terrible laugh.
an
___
She let out
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
she
Who/What
Sentence
She was frightened.
Add Detail: was or were?
was
frightened of the evil villain.
She
_____
Re-read
Build
She
was
_____
frightened of the evil villain.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write predictions about a story?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
He grinned at her with
slyness in his eyes.
__
an
She let out
evil, terrible laugh.
___
was
frightened of the evil villain.
She
_____
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Immerse Lesson 1
Can I write predictions about a story?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
When?
How?
Let's read the Vehicle Text Extract
What could the similes be suggesting?
What is happening to the 'endings'?
How do you know?
What might the story be about?
Explore and Respond: Vehicle Text Illustration
Illustration: Jub sitting on a tree branch
Can I write predictions about a story?
I think ... because ...
I predict that ...
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
grinned
Who/What
he
Sentence
He grinned.
Add Detail: a or an?
Which one shall I choose?
He grinned at her with
slyness in his eyes.
__
an
She let out
evil, terrible laugh.
___
Re-read
Build
slyness in his eyes.
__
He grinned at her with
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
evil, terrible laugh.
an
___
She let out
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
she
Who/What
Sentence
She was frightened.
Add Detail: was or were?
was
frightened of the evil villain.
She
_____
Re-read
Build
She
was
_____
frightened of the evil villain.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write predictions about a story?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
He grinned at her with
slyness in his eyes.
__
an
She let out
evil, terrible laugh.
___
was
frightened of the evil villain.
She
_____