Analyse Lesson 6
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
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Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
chased
Who/What
He
Sentence
He chased the Wisp.
Add Detail: conjunctions
He chased the Wisp
it darted away.
when
________
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Build
it darted away.
He chased the Wisp
when
________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
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Your turn to write a sentence.
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Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
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Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
saw
He
Who/What
Sentence
He saw the Wisp.
Add Detail: pronouns
He saw the Wisp and chased after
it.
___
Re-read
Build
it.
___
He saw the Wisp and chased after
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Title
Paragraph
Adjectives to describe
Interesting verbs
Past tense
Text structure
Features
The Light in the Dark Town
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets of the silent town. A young girl called Isabel was walking through the darkness alone. She was full of unhappiness. The town was so dark, it was as if all light had been forgotten. The curling shapes of shadows crept around, like they were looking for something. The girl knew that each house was full of people, yet she felt so alone. Then with a hush of wind, the tiniest something landed on her hand. It was a Wisp!
Interesting verbs
Title
Paragraph
Adjectives to describe
Past tense
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Inverted commas
Interesting verbs
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Let me show you
Inverted commas
Add the inverted commas around the speech.
I can see the brightest light, I whispered excitedly.
I had forgotten this memory, exclaimed the old man.
It wants to tell you something, I assured her.
Reveal
Inverted commas
Let's find and discuss
Isabel watched in disbelief as the Wisp danced onwards. This time it swirled through an empty, gloomy lane and landed in the hands of an exhausted woman. She was hiding and she was frightened. “It’s OK. It just wants to tell you something,” Isabel assured her. The woman lifted the Wisp to her ear with uncertainty. Then her face lit up as it whispered something. It poured out colours and music that filled the town’s pocket of darkness. The woman began to dance as she watched the sky fill with memories of her years as a ballerina. “Thank you,” breathed the grateful lady.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Inverted commas
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Inverted commas
Interesting verbs
Words and phrases for feelings
Let me show you
Match the words and phrases that show how characters feel to the best image.
expression of joy
so alone
full of unhappiness
gentle laughter
Reveal
Words and phrases for feelings
Let's find and discuss
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets of the silent town. A young girl called Isabel was walking through the darkness alone. She was full of unhappiness. The town was so dark, it was as if all light had been forgotten. The curling shapes of shadows crept around, like they were looking for something. The girl knew that each house was full of people, yet she felt so alone. Then with a hush of wind, the tiniest something landed on her hand. It was a Wisp!
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases for feelings
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Inverted commas
Interesting verbs
Words and phrases for feelings
Interesting verbs
Let me show you
Look for the interesting verbs in the sentences.
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets.
The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly.
It swirled through an empty, gloomy lane.
Click on each sentence to reveal
Interesting verbs
Let's find and discuss
The delicate, fizzing ball of light was twisting and turning and felt peculiar in her hands. It was trying to go somewhere so Isabel let it take her. The dark lanes were illuminated due to the Wisp’s colours. The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly. She followed the Wisp’s sparkling glow, chasing it through the streets.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Interesting verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Click on the sentence that uses speech punctuation correctly.
A You will feel the dream of a promise, something murmured.
B You will feel the dream of a promise," something murmured.
C "You will feel the dream of a promise," something murmured.
D "You will feel the dream of a promise, something murmured.
Tick Me
Which sentence describes character feelings?
Tick one
A Each house was full.
B She was full of unhappiness.
C The Wisp did something else.
Reveal
D Something landed on her hand.
True or False?
These words are interesting verbs:eyes, silent, homeless
True
False
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
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Soon afterwards, the Wisp did something else. Instead of flittering off, it gently settled into Isabel’s hands. Its colour brightened to become more vivid, banishing the darkness. In the light, she stared in wonder and saw her own town fill with colours. She watched those dark streets beginning to fill with crowds of now happy people. Her face grew into an expression of joy as she realised something. The Wisp hadn’t been showing her a memory. It was making her a promise of a brighter future. “One day,” it whispered to her.
He chased the Wisp
it darted away.
when
________
It came to rest in front of a homeless man sleeping in darkness on a cold bench. He opened his grey eyes and sat up while the Wisp murmured something to him. Suddenly, a flood of light spread out. It filled the darkness around him with gentle laughter. He smiled with now brightening eyes as he relived a family memory from the past.
The delicate, fizzing ball of light was twisting and turning and felt peculiar in her hands. It was trying to go somewhere so Isabel let it take her. The dark lanes were illuminated due to the Wisp’s colours. The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly. She followed the Wisp’s sparkling glow, chasing it through the streets.
“I can see the brightest light,” I whispered excitedly.
“I had forgotten this memory,” exclaimed the old man.
“It wants to tell you something,” I assured her.
He saw the Wisp and chased after
it.
___
Soon afterwards, the Wisp did something else. Instead of flittering off, it gently settled into Isabel’s hands. Its colour brightened to become more vivid, banishing the darkness. In the light, she stared in wonder and saw her own town fill with colours. She watched those dark streets beginning to fill with crowds of now happy people. Her face grew into an expression of joy as she realised something. The Wisp hadn’t been showing her a memory. It was making her a promise of a brighter future. “One day,” it whispered to her.
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets.
_______
Soon afterwards, the Wisp did something else. Instead of flittering off, it gently settled into Isabel’s hands. Its colour brightened to become more vivid, banishing the darkness. In the light, she stared in wonder and saw her own town fill with colours. She watched those dark streets beginning to fill with crowds of now happy people. Her face grew into an expression of joy as she realised something. The Wisp hadn’t been showing her a memory. It was making her a promise of a brighter future. “One day,” it whispered to her.
It came to rest in front of a homeless man sleeping in darkness on a cold bench. He opened his grey eyes and sat up while the Wisp murmured something to him. Suddenly, a flood of light spread out. It filled the darkness around him with gentle laughter. He smiled with now brightening eyes as he relived a family memory from the past.
Isabel watched in disbelief as the Wisp danced onwards. This time it swirled through an empty, gloomy lane and landed in the hands of an exhausted woman. She was hiding and she was frightened. “It’s OK. It just wants to tell you something,” Isabel assured her. The woman lifted the Wisp to her ear with uncertainty. Then her face lit up as it whispered something. It poured out colours and music that filled the town’s pocket of darkness. The woman began to dance as she watched the sky fill with memories of her years as a ballerina. “Thank you,” breathed the grateful lady.
It came to rest in front of a homeless man sleeping in darkness on a cold bench. He opened his grey eyes and sat up while the Wisp murmured something to him. Suddenly, a flood of light spread out. It filled the darkness around him with gentle laughter. He smiled with now brightening eyes as he relived a family memory from the past.
The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly.
________
The delicate, fizzing ball of light was twisting and turning and felt peculiar in her hands. It was trying to go somewhere so Isabel let it take her. The dark lanes were illuminated due to the Wisp’s colours. The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly. She followed the Wisp’s sparkling glow, chasing it through the streets.
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets of the silent town. A young girl called Isabel was walking through the darkness alone. She was full of unhappiness. The town was so dark, it was as if all light had been forgotten. The curling shapes of shadows crept around, like they were looking for something. The girl knew that each house was full of people, yet she felt so alone. Then with a hush of wind, the tiniest something landed on her hand. It was a Wisp!
Isabel watched in disbelief as the Wisp danced onwards. This time it swirled through an empty, gloomy lane and landed in the hands of an exhausted woman. She was hiding and she was frightened. “It’s OK. It just wants to tell you something,” Isabel assured her. The woman lifted the Wisp to her ear with uncertainty. Then her face lit up as it whispered something. It poured out colours and music that filled the town’s pocket of darkness. The woman began to dance as she watched the sky fill with memories of her years as a ballerina. “Thank you,” breathed the grateful lady.
full of unhappiness
gentle laughter
so alone
expression of joy
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets of the silent town. A young girl called Isabel was walking through the darkness alone. She was full of unhappiness. The town was so dark, it was as if all light had been forgotten. The curling shapes of shadows crept around, like they were looking for something. The girl knew that each house was full of people, yet she felt so alone. Then with a hush of wind, the tiniest something landed on her hand. It was a Wisp!
It swirled through an empty, gloomy lane.
_______
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Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly.
Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side.
Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat.
Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax.
Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards.
Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically.
Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm.
Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
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Analyse Lesson 6
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
My Turn
Your Turn
__________________________________________________________________________________________
copy
copy
copy
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
chased
Who/What
He
Sentence
He chased the Wisp.
Add Detail: conjunctions
He chased the Wisp
it darted away.
when
________
Re-read
Build
it darted away.
He chased the Wisp
when
________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
saw
He
Who/What
Sentence
He saw the Wisp.
Add Detail: pronouns
He saw the Wisp and chased after
it.
___
Re-read
Build
it.
___
He saw the Wisp and chased after
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Title
Paragraph
Adjectives to describe
Interesting verbs
Past tense
Text structure
Features
The Light in the Dark Town
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets of the silent town. A young girl called Isabel was walking through the darkness alone. She was full of unhappiness. The town was so dark, it was as if all light had been forgotten. The curling shapes of shadows crept around, like they were looking for something. The girl knew that each house was full of people, yet she felt so alone. Then with a hush of wind, the tiniest something landed on her hand. It was a Wisp!
Interesting verbs
Title
Paragraph
Adjectives to describe
Past tense
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Inverted commas
Interesting verbs
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Let me show you
Inverted commas
Add the inverted commas around the speech.
I can see the brightest light, I whispered excitedly.
I had forgotten this memory, exclaimed the old man.
It wants to tell you something, I assured her.
Reveal
Inverted commas
Let's find and discuss
Isabel watched in disbelief as the Wisp danced onwards. This time it swirled through an empty, gloomy lane and landed in the hands of an exhausted woman. She was hiding and she was frightened. “It’s OK. It just wants to tell you something,” Isabel assured her. The woman lifted the Wisp to her ear with uncertainty. Then her face lit up as it whispered something. It poured out colours and music that filled the town’s pocket of darkness. The woman began to dance as she watched the sky fill with memories of her years as a ballerina. “Thank you,” breathed the grateful lady.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Inverted commas
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Inverted commas
Interesting verbs
Words and phrases for feelings
Let me show you
Match the words and phrases that show how characters feel to the best image.
expression of joy
so alone
full of unhappiness
gentle laughter
Reveal
Words and phrases for feelings
Let's find and discuss
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets of the silent town. A young girl called Isabel was walking through the darkness alone. She was full of unhappiness. The town was so dark, it was as if all light had been forgotten. The curling shapes of shadows crept around, like they were looking for something. The girl knew that each house was full of people, yet she felt so alone. Then with a hush of wind, the tiniest something landed on her hand. It was a Wisp!
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases for feelings
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Inverted commas
Interesting verbs
Words and phrases for feelings
Interesting verbs
Let me show you
Look for the interesting verbs in the sentences.
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets.
The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly.
It swirled through an empty, gloomy lane.
Click on each sentence to reveal
Interesting verbs
Let's find and discuss
The delicate, fizzing ball of light was twisting and turning and felt peculiar in her hands. It was trying to go somewhere so Isabel let it take her. The dark lanes were illuminated due to the Wisp’s colours. The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly. She followed the Wisp’s sparkling glow, chasing it through the streets.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Interesting verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Click on the sentence that uses speech punctuation correctly.
A You will feel the dream of a promise, something murmured.
B You will feel the dream of a promise," something murmured.
C "You will feel the dream of a promise," something murmured.
D "You will feel the dream of a promise, something murmured.
Tick Me
Which sentence describes character feelings?
Tick one
A Each house was full.
B She was full of unhappiness.
C The Wisp did something else.
Reveal
D Something landed on her hand.
True or False?
These words are interesting verbs:eyes, silent, homeless
True
False
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
Soon afterwards, the Wisp did something else. Instead of flittering off, it gently settled into Isabel’s hands. Its colour brightened to become more vivid, banishing the darkness. In the light, she stared in wonder and saw her own town fill with colours. She watched those dark streets beginning to fill with crowds of now happy people. Her face grew into an expression of joy as she realised something. The Wisp hadn’t been showing her a memory. It was making her a promise of a brighter future. “One day,” it whispered to her.
He chased the Wisp
it darted away.
when
________
It came to rest in front of a homeless man sleeping in darkness on a cold bench. He opened his grey eyes and sat up while the Wisp murmured something to him. Suddenly, a flood of light spread out. It filled the darkness around him with gentle laughter. He smiled with now brightening eyes as he relived a family memory from the past.
The delicate, fizzing ball of light was twisting and turning and felt peculiar in her hands. It was trying to go somewhere so Isabel let it take her. The dark lanes were illuminated due to the Wisp’s colours. The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly. She followed the Wisp’s sparkling glow, chasing it through the streets.
“I can see the brightest light,” I whispered excitedly.
“I had forgotten this memory,” exclaimed the old man.
“It wants to tell you something,” I assured her.
He saw the Wisp and chased after
it.
___
Soon afterwards, the Wisp did something else. Instead of flittering off, it gently settled into Isabel’s hands. Its colour brightened to become more vivid, banishing the darkness. In the light, she stared in wonder and saw her own town fill with colours. She watched those dark streets beginning to fill with crowds of now happy people. Her face grew into an expression of joy as she realised something. The Wisp hadn’t been showing her a memory. It was making her a promise of a brighter future. “One day,” it whispered to her.
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets.
_______
Soon afterwards, the Wisp did something else. Instead of flittering off, it gently settled into Isabel’s hands. Its colour brightened to become more vivid, banishing the darkness. In the light, she stared in wonder and saw her own town fill with colours. She watched those dark streets beginning to fill with crowds of now happy people. Her face grew into an expression of joy as she realised something. The Wisp hadn’t been showing her a memory. It was making her a promise of a brighter future. “One day,” it whispered to her.
It came to rest in front of a homeless man sleeping in darkness on a cold bench. He opened his grey eyes and sat up while the Wisp murmured something to him. Suddenly, a flood of light spread out. It filled the darkness around him with gentle laughter. He smiled with now brightening eyes as he relived a family memory from the past.
Isabel watched in disbelief as the Wisp danced onwards. This time it swirled through an empty, gloomy lane and landed in the hands of an exhausted woman. She was hiding and she was frightened. “It’s OK. It just wants to tell you something,” Isabel assured her. The woman lifted the Wisp to her ear with uncertainty. Then her face lit up as it whispered something. It poured out colours and music that filled the town’s pocket of darkness. The woman began to dance as she watched the sky fill with memories of her years as a ballerina. “Thank you,” breathed the grateful lady.
It came to rest in front of a homeless man sleeping in darkness on a cold bench. He opened his grey eyes and sat up while the Wisp murmured something to him. Suddenly, a flood of light spread out. It filled the darkness around him with gentle laughter. He smiled with now brightening eyes as he relived a family memory from the past.
The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly.
________
The delicate, fizzing ball of light was twisting and turning and felt peculiar in her hands. It was trying to go somewhere so Isabel let it take her. The dark lanes were illuminated due to the Wisp’s colours. The shadows became light as it fluttered elegantly. She followed the Wisp’s sparkling glow, chasing it through the streets.
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets of the silent town. A young girl called Isabel was walking through the darkness alone. She was full of unhappiness. The town was so dark, it was as if all light had been forgotten. The curling shapes of shadows crept around, like they were looking for something. The girl knew that each house was full of people, yet she felt so alone. Then with a hush of wind, the tiniest something landed on her hand. It was a Wisp!
Isabel watched in disbelief as the Wisp danced onwards. This time it swirled through an empty, gloomy lane and landed in the hands of an exhausted woman. She was hiding and she was frightened. “It’s OK. It just wants to tell you something,” Isabel assured her. The woman lifted the Wisp to her ear with uncertainty. Then her face lit up as it whispered something. It poured out colours and music that filled the town’s pocket of darkness. The woman began to dance as she watched the sky fill with memories of her years as a ballerina. “Thank you,” breathed the grateful lady.
full of unhappiness
gentle laughter
so alone
expression of joy
A quiet breeze echoed through the dark streets of the silent town. A young girl called Isabel was walking through the darkness alone. She was full of unhappiness. The town was so dark, it was as if all light had been forgotten. The curling shapes of shadows crept around, like they were looking for something. The girl knew that each house was full of people, yet she felt so alone. Then with a hush of wind, the tiniest something landed on her hand. It was a Wisp!
It swirled through an empty, gloomy lane.
_______
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly. Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side. Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat. Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax. Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards. Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically. Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm. Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.