Analyse Lesson 6
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Verb Prefixes
his worn coat.
He began to
unfasten
___
Re-read
Build
his worn coat.
He began to
unfasten
___
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
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Let me say the sentence before I click.
Subjunctive Form
If she were braver,
she would plant them all.
________________
Re-read
Build
she would plant them all.
Check
If she were braver,
________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Title
Paragraph
Third Person
Interesting verbs
Adjectives
Text structure
Features
The Nameless Girl
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Adjectives
Title
Paragraph
Interesting verbs
Third Person
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Sentences with questions
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Linking the weather to the character
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Commas for parenthesis
Let me show you
Drag the extra information between the commas to add the parenthesis.
already crowded with clouds
lost and afraid
carried in on the wind
The gloomy sky, ________________________, was darkening.
The girl, _____________, trawled through the bins for scraps.
Dust, __________________, howled through the dirty streets.
Reveal
Commas for parenthesis
Let's find and discuss
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Commas for parenthesis
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Sentences with questions
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Linking the weather to the character
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Let me show you
Drag the best words and phrases for describing the atmosphere into the city.
a city of broken dreams
hopelessness
hopefulness
vibrant and busy
faded, forgotten and uninspiring
brightness
Reveal
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Let's find and discuss
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Sentences with questions
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Linking the weather to the character
Linking the weather to the character
Let me show you
Drag the weather phrases to the matching character.
fierce gale
nighttime cold to bite
radiate heat
Reveal
Linking the weather to the character
Let's find and discuss
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Linking the weather to the character
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Sentences with questions
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Linking the weather to the character
Sentences with questions
Let me show you
Let's discuss how these questions keep the reader interested.
Might her cracked portrait be a mirror?
Could she possibly be fixed?
Sentences with questions
Let's find and discuss
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Sentences with questions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Commas for parenthesis
Which One's Right?
A The teenager without, a second, glance turned and walked away.
B The teenager, without a second glance turned, and walked away.
C The, teenager without a second, glance turned and walked away.
D The teenager, without a second glance, turned and walked away.
Yes or No?Do they show atmosphere?
A ...the shabby, damaged city...
Yes
B ...foreboding clouds knitted...
No
C ...the dog walked on...
Check
True or False?
Some questions don't need an answer, they are there to make the reader think.
True
False
Picture Me
Which is the best image for 'matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered'?
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The gloomy sky, ________________________, was darkening.
already crowded with clouds
lost and afraid
The girl, _____________, trawled through the bins for scraps.
Dust, __________________, howled through the dirty streets.
carried in on the wind
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
a city of broken dreams
hopelessness
faded, forgotten and uninspiring
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
his worn coat.
He began to
unfasten
___
If she were braver,
she would plant them all.
________________
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
nighttime cold to bite
radiate heat
fierce gale
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Analyse Lesson 6
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Verb Prefixes
his worn coat.
He began to
unfasten
___
Re-read
Build
his worn coat.
He began to
unfasten
___
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Subjunctive Form
If she were braver,
she would plant them all.
________________
Re-read
Build
she would plant them all.
Check
If she were braver,
________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Title
Paragraph
Third Person
Interesting verbs
Adjectives
Text structure
Features
The Nameless Girl
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Adjectives
Title
Paragraph
Interesting verbs
Third Person
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Sentences with questions
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Linking the weather to the character
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Commas for parenthesis
Let me show you
Drag the extra information between the commas to add the parenthesis.
already crowded with clouds
lost and afraid
carried in on the wind
The gloomy sky, ________________________, was darkening.
The girl, _____________, trawled through the bins for scraps.
Dust, __________________, howled through the dirty streets.
Reveal
Commas for parenthesis
Let's find and discuss
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Commas for parenthesis
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Sentences with questions
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Linking the weather to the character
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Let me show you
Drag the best words and phrases for describing the atmosphere into the city.
a city of broken dreams
hopelessness
hopefulness
vibrant and busy
faded, forgotten and uninspiring
brightness
Reveal
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Let's find and discuss
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Sentences with questions
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Linking the weather to the character
Linking the weather to the character
Let me show you
Drag the weather phrases to the matching character.
fierce gale
nighttime cold to bite
radiate heat
Reveal
Linking the weather to the character
Let's find and discuss
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Linking the weather to the character
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Sentences with questions
Commas for parenthesis
Words and phrases to show atmosphere
Linking the weather to the character
Sentences with questions
Let me show you
Let's discuss how these questions keep the reader interested.
Might her cracked portrait be a mirror?
Could she possibly be fixed?
Sentences with questions
Let's find and discuss
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Sentences with questions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Commas for parenthesis
Which One's Right?
A The teenager without, a second, glance turned and walked away.
B The teenager, without a second glance turned, and walked away.
C The, teenager without a second, glance turned and walked away.
D The teenager, without a second glance, turned and walked away.
Yes or No?Do they show atmosphere?
A ...the shabby, damaged city...
Yes
B ...foreboding clouds knitted...
No
C ...the dog walked on...
Check
True or False?
Some questions don't need an answer, they are there to make the reader think.
True
False
Picture Me
Which is the best image for 'matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered'?
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The gloomy sky, ________________________, was darkening.
already crowded with clouds
lost and afraid
The girl, _____________, trawled through the bins for scraps.
Dust, __________________, howled through the dirty streets.
carried in on the wind
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
a city of broken dreams
hopelessness
faded, forgotten and uninspiring
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
his worn coat.
He began to
unfasten
___
If she were braver,
she would plant them all.
________________
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
nighttime cold to bite
radiate heat
fierce gale