Analyse Lesson 5
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Commas for Parenthesis
desolate and lost
,_____________,
stumbled through the dirty streets
The teenager
Re-read
Build
stumbled through the dirty streets
The teenager
desolate and lost
,_____________,
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Formal or Informal Speech Structures
Let me say the sentences before I click.
"You
just don't get it, do you?"
______________________________
she said.
_____
simply do not understand,"
_______________________________
"You
she insisted.
_________
Re-read
Build
Drag the formal or informal vocabulary to alter the formality.
she insisted.
_________
just don't get it, do you?"
______________________________
she said.
_____
simply do not understand,"
_______________________________
Check
"You
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Title
Paragraph
Third Person
Interesting verbs
Adjectives
Text structure
Features
The Nameless Girl
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Adjectives
Title
Paragraph
Interesting verbs
Third Person
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Adverbials
Modal Verbs
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Memorize the positions
Verb prefixes
Let me show you
Try adding the prefixes to the verbs to see if they make new words.
Prefix
Verb
over-
un-
cover
pack
de-
dis-
re-
mis-
place
Reveal
Verb prefixes
Let's find and discuss
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Verb prefixes
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Adverbials
Modal Verbs
Memorize the positions
Adverbs
Let me show you
Click the adverbs to change how possible the event is to happen.
surely
certainly
possibly
She had __________ stolen the bag.
surely
certainly
possibly
surely
certainly
The teenager __________ thought about being kinder.
possibly
surely
certainly
She would ___________ find a home in the city.
possibly
Adverbs
Let's find and discuss
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Adverbials
Modal Verbs
Let me show you
Modal Verbs
Let's order the modal verbs from most to least likely to happen.
could
might
can
must
may
should
will
would
ought to
Most likely
Least likely
She _________ cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime.
Modal Verbs
Let's find and discuss
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Imagine
Remove?
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Modal Verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Adverbials
Modal Verbs
Reveal
Adverbials
Let me show you
Drag the adverbials into the passage to help it flow.
As night fell
Later
Early in the morning
soon
________________, the girl trudged along the cracked pavement, her footsteps echoing softly against the empty walls. Her stomach ____ growled, a sharp reminder of another day gone without food. _____, she clutched the small acorn in her palm, feeling its smooth surface warm against her skin. __________, she paused beneath a flickering streetlight, wondering if the world had always been this silent.
Adverbials
Let's find and discuss
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Odd One Out
Which is not a verb prefix?
B un-
A re-
C tion-
D dis-
Tick Me
Tick the adverbs of possibility. Tick two.
A certainly
B wearing
C maybe
Check
D befriend
True or False?
Modal verbs are used to show how possible something is.
False
True
Which One's Right?
A Adverbials help writers to persuade the reader to do or think something.
B Adverbials help writing to flow across paragraphs.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
desolate and lost
,_____________,
stumbled through the dirty streets
The teenager
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
unplace
overplace
deplace
displace
replace
misplace
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
unpack
overpack
depack
dispack
repack
mispack
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
overcover
uncover
decover
discover
recover
miscover
Early in the morning
________________, the girl trudged along the cracked pavement, her footsteps echoing softly against the empty walls. Her stomach ____ growled, a sharp reminder of another day gone without food. _____, she clutched the small acorn in her palm, feeling its smooth surface warm against her skin. __________, she paused beneath a flickering streetlight, wondering if the world had always been this silent.
soon
Later
As night fell
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
"You
just don't get it, do you?"
______________________________
she said.
_____
simply do not understand,"
_______________________________
"You
she insisted.
_________
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Analyse Lesson 5
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Commas for Parenthesis
desolate and lost
,_____________,
stumbled through the dirty streets
The teenager
Re-read
Build
stumbled through the dirty streets
The teenager
desolate and lost
,_____________,
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Formal or Informal Speech Structures
Let me say the sentences before I click.
"You
just don't get it, do you?"
______________________________
she said.
_____
simply do not understand,"
_______________________________
"You
she insisted.
_________
Re-read
Build
Drag the formal or informal vocabulary to alter the formality.
she insisted.
_________
just don't get it, do you?"
______________________________
she said.
_____
simply do not understand,"
_______________________________
Check
"You
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Title
Paragraph
Third Person
Interesting verbs
Adjectives
Text structure
Features
The Nameless Girl
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Adjectives
Title
Paragraph
Interesting verbs
Third Person
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Adverbials
Modal Verbs
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Memorize the positions
Verb prefixes
Let me show you
Try adding the prefixes to the verbs to see if they make new words.
Prefix
Verb
over-
un-
cover
pack
de-
dis-
re-
mis-
place
Reveal
Verb prefixes
Let's find and discuss
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Verb prefixes
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Adverbials
Modal Verbs
Memorize the positions
Adverbs
Let me show you
Click the adverbs to change how possible the event is to happen.
surely
certainly
possibly
She had __________ stolen the bag.
surely
certainly
possibly
surely
certainly
The teenager __________ thought about being kinder.
possibly
surely
certainly
She would ___________ find a home in the city.
possibly
Adverbs
Let's find and discuss
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Adverbials
Modal Verbs
Let me show you
Modal Verbs
Let's order the modal verbs from most to least likely to happen.
could
might
can
must
may
should
will
would
ought to
Most likely
Least likely
She _________ cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime.
Modal Verbs
Let's find and discuss
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Imagine
Remove?
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Modal Verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Adverbs
Verb Prefixes
Adverbials
Modal Verbs
Reveal
Adverbials
Let me show you
Drag the adverbials into the passage to help it flow.
As night fell
Later
Early in the morning
soon
________________, the girl trudged along the cracked pavement, her footsteps echoing softly against the empty walls. Her stomach ____ growled, a sharp reminder of another day gone without food. _____, she clutched the small acorn in her palm, feeling its smooth surface warm against her skin. __________, she paused beneath a flickering streetlight, wondering if the world had always been this silent.
Adverbials
Let's find and discuss
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
Reveal
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Odd One Out
Which is not a verb prefix?
B un-
A re-
C tion-
D dis-
Tick Me
Tick the adverbs of possibility. Tick two.
A certainly
B wearing
C maybe
Check
D befriend
True or False?
Modal verbs are used to show how possible something is.
False
True
Which One's Right?
A Adverbials help writers to persuade the reader to do or think something.
B Adverbials help writing to flow across paragraphs.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
desolate and lost
,_____________,
stumbled through the dirty streets
The teenager
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
unplace
overplace
deplace
displace
replace
misplace
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
The girl paused and stared at her reflection in a broken shop window. It certainly was difficult to work out if the image it returned once held a smile. Might her cracked portrait be a mirror of her inside world? Could she possibly be fixed? The acorn she held, clutched so tightly in her hand, seemed to radiate heat. She held it tighter still as she passed by.
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
unpack
overpack
depack
dispack
repack
mispack
The girl walked alone, dirty and starved. Yesterday, a fierce gale overshadowed the world, leaving gritty traces in her head of tangled hair. Today, matching her darkened view of the city, grey clouds gathered. This was a place where she appreciated little, gave little and loved even less. Now wearing a vacant, detached expression, dragging her torn coat behind her, she aimlessly wandered through this city of hopelessness.
overcover
uncover
decover
discover
recover
miscover
Early in the morning
________________, the girl trudged along the cracked pavement, her footsteps echoing softly against the empty walls. Her stomach ____ growled, a sharp reminder of another day gone without food. _____, she clutched the small acorn in her palm, feeling its smooth surface warm against her skin. __________, she paused beneath a flickering streetlight, wondering if the world had always been this silent.
soon
Later
As night fell
From the shadows, a shape moved towards her in the darkness. A lonely street dog approached, maybe to befriend her, then nudged her leg gently. With her face fixed into a scowl, a squint in her eyes mistrusting him, she reacted, “What are you staring at? You’re not mine and I’m not yours.” The dog cowered a little, then disappeared into the shadows again.
Hungrily, she searched through a nearby bin for scraps with numb fingers, unfolding wrappers in desperate hope of even a whisper of food. In a defeated street with broken streetlights, she scanned for shelter. In a long-forgotten alley, she lay down her oversized coat – her blanket, her home. She should cocoon herself inside and wait for the nighttime cold to bite. Yet still, she held onto her acorn. She thought, quietly to herself, perhaps a seed of hope would grow tonight.
"You
just don't get it, do you?"
______________________________
she said.
_____
simply do not understand,"
_______________________________
"You
she insisted.
_________