Analyse Lesson 5
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was
Who/What
the story
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The story was lost.
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have been
______________
The story endings
lost.
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have been
______________
lost.
The story endings
___________________________________________________________________________
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brought
Verb
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the resolutions
The resolutions brought comfort.
Sentence
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The
resolutions brought comfort.
endings'
___________
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endings'
___________
The
resolutions brought comfort.
___________________________________________________________________________
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A Letter for Parents and Carers
Dear Parents and Carers,
Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
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What will Cinderella do without her prince?
What about the death of Snow White?
Can you imagine their friends' heartbreak?
Could you live with that on your conscience?
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Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
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please read
please, please read
or
we are very, very concerned
we are concerned
or
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Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
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therefore
however
because
We are very concerned
we beg you to listen.
we have important news.
Listen carefully
We have a solution
we need your help.
until
Don't read more stories
Check
Conjunctions
Let's find and discuss
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Conjunctions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
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How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
A What will Cinderella do without her prince.
B What will Cinderella do without her prince!
C What will Cinderella do without her prince"
D What will Cinderella do without her prince?
Yes or No?
Are there repeating words?
A We are very concerned.
No
Yes
No
Yes
B We are very, very concerned.
No
Yes
C We are extremely concerned.
Odd One Out
Which word is not a conjunction?
B until
A when
C although
D distress
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
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Feedback: Who did what well?
The
resolutions brought comfort.
endings'
___________
have been
______________
The story endings
lost.
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Dear Parents and Carers,
Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
therefore
We are very concerned
we beg you to listen.
we have important news.
Listen carefully
because
however
We have a solution
we need your help.
until
Don't read more stories
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Dear Parents and Carers,
Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
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Analyse Lesson 5
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
the story
Sentence
The story was lost.
Add Detail: present perfect tense
have been
______________
The story endings
lost.
Re-read
Build
have been
______________
lost.
The story endings
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
brought
Verb
Who/What
the resolutions
The resolutions brought comfort.
Sentence
Add Detail: plural and possessive -s
The
resolutions brought comfort.
endings'
___________
Re-read
Build
endings'
___________
The
resolutions brought comfort.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Openings and closings
Paragraph
Formal vocabulary
Persuasive words and phrases
Addressing the reader
Text structure
Features
A Letter for Parents and Carers
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Paragraph
Addressing the reader
Openings and closings
Formal vocabulary
Persuasive words and phrases
Click on Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Repeating words
Sentences with questions
Conjunctions
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Sentences with questions
Let me show you
Let's discuss how these questions keep the reader interested.
What will Cinderella do without her prince?
What about the death of Snow White?
Can you imagine their friends' heartbreak?
Could you live with that on your conscience?
Sentences with questions
Let's find and discuss
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Sentences with questions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Repeating words
Sentences with questions
Conjunctions
Repeating words
Let me show you
Which is stronger? Click to check.
please read
please, please read
or
we are very, very concerned
we are concerned
or
Repeating words
Let's find and discuss
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Repeating words
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Repeating words
Sentences with questions
Conjunctions
Conjunctions
Let me show you
therefore
however
because
We are very concerned
we beg you to listen.
we have important news.
Listen carefully
We have a solution
we need your help.
until
Don't read more stories
Check
Conjunctions
Let's find and discuss
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Conjunctions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
A What will Cinderella do without her prince.
B What will Cinderella do without her prince!
C What will Cinderella do without her prince"
D What will Cinderella do without her prince?
Yes or No?
Are there repeating words?
A We are very concerned.
No
Yes
No
Yes
B We are very, very concerned.
No
Yes
C We are extremely concerned.
Odd One Out
Which word is not a conjunction?
B until
A when
C although
D distress
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The
resolutions brought comfort.
endings'
___________
have been
______________
The story endings
lost.
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
therefore
We are very concerned
we beg you to listen.
we have important news.
Listen carefully
because
however
We have a solution
we need your help.
until
Don't read more stories
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?