Analyse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Conjunctions
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as
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it is very important
of this sentence
every word
__
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as
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every word
Please read
it is very important
of this sentence
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Expanded noun phrases
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________________________________
Think about
all the frightened children across the world
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all the frightened children across the world
________________________________
Think about
___________________________________________________________________________
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My turn to write the sentence.
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Your turn to write a sentence.
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Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Openings and closings
Paragraph
Formal vocabulary
Persuasive words and phrases
Addressing the reader
Text structure
Features
A Letter for Parents and Carers
Dear Parents and Carers,
Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Paragraph
Addressing the reader
Openings and closings
Formal vocabulary
Persuasive words and phrases
Click on Click off
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Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Apostrophes for plurals
Fronted adverbials
Expanded noun phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Apostrophes for plurals
Let me show you
Place an apostrophe to show plural possession.
the toddlers tears
the parents worries
the mums worries
the stories endings
the kids bedtimes
the fairytales words
Check
Apostrophes for plurals
Let's find and discuss
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Apostrophes for plurals
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Apostrophes for plurals
Fronted adverbials
Expanded noun phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Expanded noun phrases
Let me show you
Swap the adjectives to see how it changes the description.
interesting
exciting
dire
the __________ situation for all
some __________ news for you
the ___________ impact on your children
Expanded noun phrases
Let's find and discuss
Dear Parents and Carers,
Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Expanded noun phrases
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Apostrophes for plurals
Fronted adverbials
Expanded noun phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Fronted adverbials
Let me show you
Place a comma after each fronted adverbial.
Across the whole world the children will be heartbroken.
Without their story endings story time will never be the same again.
Late into the night the children remain awake with no stories.
Check
Fronted adverbials
Let's find and discuss
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Fronted adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Apostrophes for plurals
Fronted adverbials
Expanded noun phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Let me show you
Click the adjectives from least to most persuasive to make the power meter rise.
We
you.
implore
ask
request
implore
Persuasive words and phrases
Let's find and discuss
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic.
Yours faithfully,
The Story Enders
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Feel
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Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Persuasive words and phrases
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Which plural possession is correctly punctuated?
B other's feelings
A others feelings
C others' feelings
D others feelings'
Tick Me
Which is an expanded noun phrase?
Tick one
A Please, please read
B come to our attention
C a dire, grave situation
Check
D We implore you to think
True or False?
Fronted adverbials show time, place and manner of a sentence.
False
True
Odd One Out
Which does not contain persuasive words and phrases?
A We would urge you to...
B It has come to our attention that...
C We implore you to think...
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the toddlers' tears
the parents' worries
the mums' worries
the stories' endings
the kids' bedtimes
the fairytales' words
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
place
Across the whole world, the children will be heartbroken.
Over the horizon, the moon cast its eerie light over the land.
manner
Without their story endings, story time will never be the same again.
Surrounded by magic, she looked around in wonder and fear.
time
Before long, they realised that the malicious woman had tricked them.
Late into the night, the children lie restlessly awake.
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Think about
________________________________
all the frightened children across the world
Dear Parents and Carers,
Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
as
of this sentence
every word
Please read
it is very important
__
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Dear Parents and Carers,
Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Dear Parents and Carers,
Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
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Analyse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Conjunctions
Let me say the sentence before I click.
as
Please read
it is very important
of this sentence
every word
__
Re-read
Build
as
__
every word
Please read
it is very important
of this sentence
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Expanded noun phrases
Let me say the sentence before I click.
________________________________
Think about
all the frightened children across the world
Re-read
Build
all the frightened children across the world
________________________________
Think about
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Openings and closings
Paragraph
Formal vocabulary
Persuasive words and phrases
Addressing the reader
Text structure
Features
A Letter for Parents and Carers
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Paragraph
Addressing the reader
Openings and closings
Formal vocabulary
Persuasive words and phrases
Click on Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
Apostrophes for plurals
Fronted adverbials
Expanded noun phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Apostrophes for plurals
Let me show you
Place an apostrophe to show plural possession.
the toddlers tears
the parents worries
the mums worries
the stories endings
the kids bedtimes
the fairytales words
Check
Apostrophes for plurals
Let's find and discuss
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Apostrophes for plurals
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Apostrophes for plurals
Fronted adverbials
Expanded noun phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Expanded noun phrases
Let me show you
Swap the adjectives to see how it changes the description.
interesting
exciting
dire
the __________ situation for all
some __________ news for you
the ___________ impact on your children
Expanded noun phrases
Let's find and discuss
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Expanded noun phrases
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Apostrophes for plurals
Fronted adverbials
Expanded noun phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Fronted adverbials
Let me show you
Place a comma after each fronted adverbial.
Across the whole world the children will be heartbroken.
Without their story endings story time will never be the same again.
Late into the night the children remain awake with no stories.
Check
Fronted adverbials
Let's find and discuss
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Fronted adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Apostrophes for plurals
Fronted adverbials
Expanded noun phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Persuasive words and phrases
Let me show you
Click the adjectives from least to most persuasive to make the power meter rise.
We
you.
implore
ask
request
implore
Persuasive words and phrases
Let's find and discuss
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Replace?
Feel
Remove?
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Persuasive words and phrases
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Which plural possession is correctly punctuated?
B other's feelings
A others feelings
C others' feelings
D others feelings'
Tick Me
Which is an expanded noun phrase?
Tick one
A Please, please read
B come to our attention
C a dire, grave situation
Check
D We implore you to think
True or False?
Fronted adverbials show time, place and manner of a sentence.
False
True
Odd One Out
Which does not contain persuasive words and phrases?
A We would urge you to...
B It has come to our attention that...
C We implore you to think...
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the toddlers' tears
the parents' worries
the mums' worries
the stories' endings
the kids' bedtimes
the fairytales' words
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
Once again, we implore you to temporarily cancel bedtime stories for your children. We are very, very concerned about this situation, therefore we beg you to hear the significance of our warnings. The consequences of ignoring them could well be catastrophic. Yours faithfully, The Story Enders
place
Across the whole world, the children will be heartbroken.
Over the horizon, the moon cast its eerie light over the land.
manner
Without their story endings, story time will never be the same again.
Surrounded by magic, she looked around in wonder and fear.
time
Before long, they realised that the malicious woman had tricked them.
Late into the night, the children lie restlessly awake.
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Think about
________________________________
all the frightened children across the world
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
as
of this sentence
every word
Please read
it is very important
__
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?
Firstly, we would urge you to forgo reading any bedtime stories this evening. We implore you to think for a moment about the considerable emotional impact on your children. Just imagine the damage that could be caused from what will become traumatic storytelling. What will Cinderella do without her prince? What about the death of Snow White? How about eternal slumber for Sleeping Beauty?
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Dear Parents and Carers, Please, please, read every word of this letter as we have some rather important and disturbing news for you. It has come to our attention that all your much-loved bedtime stories’ happy endings have sadly been lost. They no longer exist on the pages of your books. This is a dire, grave situation for all, consequently we warn you to consider the precautions you must take tonight.
Furthermore, we ask you to think of others’ feelings. In class, your children may pass these joyless tales on to their peers if they hear such stories without their endings. Can you imagine their friends’ heartbreak? Worryingly, unhappiness would spread as quickly as the flu, chicken pox and measles. Could you live with that on your conscience?