Analyse Lesson 5
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Which one shall I choose?
Tense
his chance
took
The villain
_____
his chance
The villain
has taken
____________
Re-read
Build
The villain
took
_____
his chance
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
The villain
has taken
____________
his chance
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentence before I click.
was or were?
They
warned not to wander too far
was
_____
They
warned not to wander too far
were
______
Re-read
Build
warned not to wander too far
They
were
______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
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Adapt?
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Sentence time over! Click to move on.
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The Queen and The Apple
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
Sentences with questions
Paragraph
Title
Metaphors
Third person
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
was or were?
Prepositionalphrases
Speech punctuation
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
was or were?
Let me show you
were
was
were
was
Her voice
calm.
The steady footsteps
getting closer.
The witch
pacing restlessly.
Their hopes of escape
fading away.
Reveal
was or were?
Let's find and discuss
Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple. Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
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was or were?
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was or were?
Prepositionalphrases
Fronted adverbials
Speech punctuation
Prepositional phrases
Let me show you
Drag the preposition to complete the prepositional phrase.
onto
behind
under
a sharp, poisoned arrow her black cape
the evil, jealous queen the wooden door
_________
________
____________
______________
_______
a sly smile her cruel face
___________
Reveal
Prepositional phrases
Let's find and discuss
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought.
“No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
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Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Prepositional phrases
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
was or were?
Prepositionalphrases
Speech punctuation
Fronted adverbials
Let me show you
Let's place a comma after each fronted adverbial.
Over the horizon the moon cast its eerie light over the land.
Surrounded by magic she looked around in wonder and fear.
Before long they realised that the malicious woman had tricked them.
Reveal
Fronted adverbials
Let's find and discuss
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
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Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Fronted adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
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Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
was or were?
Prepositionalphrases
Speech punctuation
Speech punctuation
Let me show you
Let's add the missing speech punctuation.
Of course you can trust me he snarled.
Of course you can trust me he snarled
She whispered quietly How will we ever escape?
We aren't supposed to be here they pleaded.
We aren't supposed to be here they pleaded.
Reveal
Speech punctuation
Let's find and discuss
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought.
“No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
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Question Quiz Time
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Which One's Right?
A Their hopes of escape was fading away.
B Their hopes of escape were fading away.
Tick Me
Which of these do you need to punctuate speech correctly?
Tick two
A Spoken words begin with a capital letter.
B Spoken words are between inverted commas.
C Always use the word said.
Check
D Never use a capital letter.
True or False?
Prepositional phrases show where something is.
False
True
Fronted adverbials
Which One's Right?
A Deep in the forest he breathed deeply...
B Deep in the forest he, breathed deeply...
C Deep in the forest, he breathed deeply...
D Deep in the, forest he breathed deeply...
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“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her.
Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit.
“Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple.
Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
Over the horizon, the moon cast its eerie light over the land.
______________
Surrounded by magic, she looked around in wonder and fear.
__________________
Before long, they realised that the malicious woman had tricked them.
_________
Her voice
calm.
was
The steady footsteps
getting closer.
were
The witch
pacing restlessly.
was
Their hopes of escape
fading away.
were
his chance
took
The villain
_____
"Of course you can trust me," he snarled.
Of course you can trust me he snarled
She whispered quietly, "How will we ever escape?"
She whispered quietly how will we ever escape?
"We aren't supposed to be here!" they pleaded.
We aren't supposed to be here they pleaded.
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her.
Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit.
“Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple.
Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought.
“No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
his chance
The villain
has taken
____________
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought.
“No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her.
Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit.
“Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple.
Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
a sharp, poisoned arrow her black cape
the evil, jealous queen the wooden door
under
________
behind
_______
____________
onto
______________
______
a sly smile her cruel face
___________
A Spoken words begin with a capital letter.
B Spoken words are between inverted commas.
They
warned not to wander too far
were
______
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Analyse Lesson 5
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Let me say the sentence before I click.
Which one shall I choose?
Tense
his chance
took
The villain
_____
his chance
The villain
has taken
____________
Re-read
Build
The villain
took
_____
his chance
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
The villain
has taken
____________
his chance
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Let me say the sentence before I click.
was or were?
They
warned not to wander too far
was
_____
They
warned not to wander too far
were
______
Re-read
Build
warned not to wander too far
They
were
______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.
The Example Text has...
Paragraphs
Title
Third person
Sentences with questions
Metaphors
Text structure
Features
The Queen and The Apple
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
Sentences with questions
Paragraph
Title
Metaphors
Third person
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
was or were?
Prepositionalphrases
Speech punctuation
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
was or were?
Let me show you
were
was
were
was
Her voice
calm.
The steady footsteps
getting closer.
The witch
pacing restlessly.
Their hopes of escape
fading away.
Reveal
was or were?
Let's find and discuss
Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple. Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
was or were?
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
was or were?
Prepositionalphrases
Fronted adverbials
Speech punctuation
Prepositional phrases
Let me show you
Drag the preposition to complete the prepositional phrase.
onto
behind
under
a sharp, poisoned arrow her black cape
the evil, jealous queen the wooden door
_________
________
____________
______________
_______
a sly smile her cruel face
___________
Reveal
Prepositional phrases
Let's find and discuss
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought. “No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Prepositional phrases
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
was or were?
Prepositionalphrases
Speech punctuation
Fronted adverbials
Let me show you
Let's place a comma after each fronted adverbial.
Over the horizon the moon cast its eerie light over the land.
Surrounded by magic she looked around in wonder and fear.
Before long they realised that the malicious woman had tricked them.
Reveal
Fronted adverbials
Let's find and discuss
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Fronted adverbials
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Fronted adverbials
was or were?
Prepositionalphrases
Speech punctuation
Speech punctuation
Let me show you
Let's add the missing speech punctuation.
Of course you can trust me he snarled.
Of course you can trust me he snarled
She whispered quietly How will we ever escape?
We aren't supposed to be here they pleaded.
We aren't supposed to be here they pleaded.
Reveal
Speech punctuation
Let's find and discuss
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought. “No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Speech punctuation
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
A Their hopes of escape was fading away.
B Their hopes of escape were fading away.
Tick Me
Which of these do you need to punctuate speech correctly?
Tick two
A Spoken words begin with a capital letter.
B Spoken words are between inverted commas.
C Always use the word said.
Check
D Never use a capital letter.
True or False?
Prepositional phrases show where something is.
False
True
Fronted adverbials
Which One's Right?
A Deep in the forest he breathed deeply...
B Deep in the forest he, breathed deeply...
C Deep in the forest, he breathed deeply...
D Deep in the, forest he breathed deeply...
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
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Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her. Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple. Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
Over the horizon, the moon cast its eerie light over the land.
______________
Surrounded by magic, she looked around in wonder and fear.
__________________
Before long, they realised that the malicious woman had tricked them.
_________
Her voice
calm.
was
The steady footsteps
getting closer.
were
The witch
pacing restlessly.
was
Their hopes of escape
fading away.
were
his chance
took
The villain
_____
"Of course you can trust me," he snarled.
Of course you can trust me he snarled
She whispered quietly, "How will we ever escape?"
She whispered quietly how will we ever escape?
"We aren't supposed to be here!" they pleaded.
We aren't supposed to be here they pleaded.
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her. Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple. Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought. “No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
his chance
The villain
has taken
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It had been such a busy morning. Gently shaking her head in frustration, Snow White had just completed the tidying. Then came the knock. Delighted at the thought of company, she eagerly opened the door. She smiled in anticipation of who should be behind it. Could it be one of her seven friends? Were they bringing her good news? Slowly, the door creaked open, the sunlight outside illuminating Snow White’s loveliness. There in contrast, stood the evil, jealous queen behind the wooden door. She met Snow White’s warm smile and her eyes narrowed with dislike, disdain and the ugliness of envy. Her veiny, aged hands were rubbing together as she forced a sly smile onto her cruel face. Snow White felt a sense of unease.
Oh, and what was this… a handsome prince in the doorway? Was this a chance to provide the kiss of life? No, there would be no room for a resolution here - not a chance. A gasp of horror on his face with widening eyes… an easy victim, the queen thought. “No!” the prince cried, “Tell me it isn’t so!” The heartless queen faced him, clutching a sharp, poisoned arrow under her black cape. The cruel grin now returned to her face. It was time for him to meet a sudden end, too. Lurching towards him, she drove the piercing point through his anguished heart. He withered to the floor in crippling grief, of course. She stepped over his lifeless body, allowed herself a final smile and uttered the words, “This time, there will be no happy ending.”
“My lovely one!” the queen cunningly crooned. “Oh, my lovely one! I have brought for you the shiniest, juiciest, most delicious apple to enjoy!” Averting her gaze from Snow White’s beauty, she pushed it at her. Snow White accepted it with grateful wonderment. “Why, thank you!” she cried. “How very kind!” So pleased was Snow White, she did not hesitate to receive this gift of poisonous deceit. “Eat it,” the queen ordered whilst her eyes were narrowing. Pausing only to inhale the inciting fragrance, Snow White sank her pearl teeth into the flesh of the crisp apple. Just then, the girl exclaimed, “Delicious!” The queen broke a smile of satisfaction. She knew it wouldn’t be long… and it wasn’t. Just then, Snow White clutched her throat in confusion, dizzily sank to the floor and closed her eyes of innocence. She coughed, spluttered and choked her last breath as the apple’s remains were rolling across the floor. The queen snickered quietly and exhaled in approval.
a sharp, poisoned arrow her black cape
the evil, jealous queen the wooden door
under
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behind
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onto
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a sly smile her cruel face
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A Spoken words begin with a capital letter.
B Spoken words are between inverted commas.
They
warned not to wander too far
were
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