Plan & Write Sentence(s): Whirly Twirly Me

Lessons

7: Plan Learning Objective: Can I plan my Octopus Opening?

Ready

Jump In

Sentence Snake Time

I will model a sentence.

Sentence Snake Time

Now you make a sentence.

Steady

Teach

Let's look at how to plan our own feelings narrative.

Teacher's Plan

This is what a completed plan looks like.

Teach

Planning Writing

Write

Can I plan my own Octopus Opening?

Planning Writing

We are going to complete the Octopus Opening.

Planning Writing

We are going to complete the Octopus Opening.

• Words and phrases • Pictures • Writer's Knowledge

Review

Can I plan my own Octopus Opening?

• Say your plan 'out loud' so it sounds like the writing you will do.
• Have I included examples of all the Writer's Knowledge?
• Is my plan going to help me with my writing?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

8: Write Learning Objective: Can I write my Octopus Opening?

Ready

Jump In

Sentence Snake Time

I will model a sentence.

Sentence Snake Time

Now you will make a sentence.

Steady

Teach

Writing a Feelings Narrative

Let's look at the Octopus Opening.

What Writer's Knowledge can you see?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Teach

Writing a Feelings Narrative

I am going to model writing the Octopus Opening.

What Writer's Knowledge can you see?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Teach

Write

Can I write my Octopus Opening?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Write

Review

Can I write my Octopus Opening?

• Read what you have written out loud.
• Does it make sense? What changes do you need to make?
• Have I used some examples of Writer's Knowledge?
• Use the sentence checker and, line by line, edit for improvement.

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Review

9: Plan Learning Objective: Can I plan my Build Up Bear?

Ready

Jump In

Sentence Snake Time

I will model a sentence.

Sentence Snake Time

Now you will make a sentence.

Steady

Teach

Write

Can I plan my own Build up Bear?

Planning Writing

We are going to complete the Build up Bear.

Planning Writing

We are going to complete the Build up Bear

• Words and phrases • Pictures • Writer's Knowledge

Review

Can I plan my Build up Bear?

• Say your plan 'out loud' so it sounds like the writing you will do.
• Have I included examples of all the Writer's Knowledge?
• Is my plan going to help me with my writing?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

8: Write Learning Objective: Can I write my Build up Bear?

Ready

Jump In

Sentence Snake Time

I will model a sentence.

Sentence Snake Time

Now you will make a sentence.

Steady

Teach

Writing a Feelings Narrative

Let's look at the Build up Bear.

What Writer's Knowledge can you see?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Teach

Writing a Feelings Narrative

I am going to model writing the Build up Bear.

What Writer's Knowledge can you see?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Teach

Write

Can I write my Build up Bear?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Write

Review

Can I write my Build up Bear?

• Read what you have written out loud.
• Does it make sense? What changes do you need to make?
• Have I used some examples of Writer's Knowledge?
• Use the sentence checker and, line by line, edit for improvement.

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Review

11: Plan Learning Objective: Can I plan my Problem Penguin?

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Jump In

Sentence Snake Time

I will model a sentence.

Sentence Snake Time

Now you will make a sentence.

Steady

Teach

Write

Can I plan my own Problem Penguin?

Planning Writing

We are going to complete the Problem Penguin.

Planning Writing

We are going to complete the Problem Penguin.

• Words and phrases • Pictures • Writer's Knowledge

Review

Can I plan my own Problem Penguin?

• Say your plan 'out loud' so it sounds like the writing you will do.
• Have I included examples of all the Writer's Knowledge?
• Is my plan going to help me with my writing?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

12: Write Learning Objective: Can I write my Problem Penguin?

Ready

Jump In

Sentence Snake Time

I will model a sentence.

Sentence Snake Time

Now you will make a sentence.

Steady

Teach

Writing a Feelings Narrative

Let's look at the Problem Penguin.

What Writer's Knowledge can you see?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Teach

Writing a Feelings Narrative

I am going to model writing the Problem Penguin.

What Writer's Knowledge can you see?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Teach

Write

Can I write my Problem Penguin?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Write

Review

Can I write my Problem Penguin?

• Read what you have written out loud.
• Does it make sense? What changes do you need to make?
• Have I used some examples of Writer's Knowledge?
• Use the sentence checker and, line by line, edit for improvement.

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Review

13: Plan Learning Objective: Can I plan my Elephant Ending?

Ready

Jump In

Sentence Snake Time

I will model a sentence.

Sentence Snake Time

Now you will make a sentence.

Steady

Teach

Write

Can I plan my own Elephant Ending?

Planning Writing

We are going to complete the Elephant Ending.

Planning Writing

We are going to complete the Elephant Ending.

• Words and phrases • Pictures • Writer's Knowledge

Review

Can I plan my own Elephant Ending?

• Say your plan 'out loud' so it sounds like the writing you will do.
• Have I included examples of all the Writer's Knowledge?
• Is my plan going to help me with my writing?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

14: Write Learning Objective: Can I write my Elephant Ending?

Ready

Jump In

Sentence Snake Time

I will model a sentence.

Sentence Snake Time

Now you will make a sentence.

Steady

Teach

Writing a Feelings Narrative

Let's look at the Elephant Ending.

What Writer's Knowledge can you see?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Teach

Writing a Feelings Narrative

I am going to model writing the Elephant Ending.

What Writer's Knowledge can you see?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Teach

Write

Can I write my Elephant Ending?

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Write

Review

Can I write my Elephant Ending?

• Read what you have written out loud.
• Does it make sense? What changes do you need to make?
• Have I used some examples of Writer's Knowledge?
• Use the sentence checker and, line by line, edit for improvement.

Writer's Knowledge Reminder

Review