Mattison AELC 3203 LinkedIn Profile Revision

LinkedIn ProfileREVISION STRATEGIES

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AELC 3203 Professional Writing

Today's meeting will guide you through some revision strategies. Without making any edits (save that for 2nd drafting session), we will focus on identifying areas that need improvement by discussing three revision strategies with methods and benefits for each. A revision quiz on these strategies and plans will be available.

LinkedIn

invitation to connect

start at the very beginning

the story of soft skills

Closure

Development

Intro

How it all started

Introduction

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A long, long time ago in a land far away...

Open with an anecdote to draw the reader in and provide credibility about your dedication to your career.

Considerations

• a person who inspired you
• a defining time that led you to this career
• an achievement that revealed your gifting/talent
• the definitive time you chose this career path

Introduction

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Revision strategy...

REWRITE - start a new draft from scratch Choose a new prompt and try drafting a new opening

Benefits:

• Fresh Perspective: topic from a new angle, revealing ideas or insights that may have been missed.
• Improved Clarity: clearer, more coherent expression, making the draft easier to understand.
• Enhanced Creativity: exploration of new themes may produce more engaging content.

Introduction

How to...

invitation to connect

start at the very beginning

the story of soft skills

Closure

Development

Intro

The story of soft skills

Development

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through oral presentations and written documents

How you know

attention to detail

organization

the story of soft skills

justification from your résumé and cover letter

communication

problem solving

teamwork

leadership

What you can do

by prioritizing multiple clients

through excel data analysis

worked with diverse group to met shared objective

by supervising a team

by addressing issues in a fast-paced environment

Development

Info

Revision strategy...

SHOW, DON'T TELL - increase the narrative form with descriptive language

Benefits:

• Increased Engagement: Showing through action and sensory details draws readers into the story, making it more immersive.
• Stronger Emotional Connection: Sensory language helps readers feel the emotions, creating a deeper impact.
• Greater Clarity and Depth: Specific, vivid descriptions make the narrative clearer and more relatable.

Development

How to...

invitation to connect

start at the very beginning

the story of soft skills

Closure

Development

Intro

Invitation to connect

Closure

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Call to action...

Invitation to connect

Closure

Think about what you want your audience to do after reading your summary. An invitation to connect is a great way to end, but depending on your goal, you may ask for something else. Be specific and you’ll be more likely to get what you want.

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Revision strategy...

NARROWING - get more specific about your goals

Benefits:

• Clearer Direction: provides clear understanding, reducing confusion and increasing the likelihood of response.

• Targeted Engagement: attract the right people—whether it’s potential employers, collaborators, or clients—who are aligned with your goals.

• Stronger Impact: more personalized and relevant, making it more compelling and effective in motivating the audience to act.

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How to...

These are just some revision strategies!

Revision Quiz

Networking: "Let’s connect! Feel free to reach out if you’d like to grow your network." Purpose: Encourages professional connections for networking and relationship building. Job-Seeking: "I'm currently exploring new opportunities in [industry/field]. If you’re hiring, I’d love to chat!" Purpose: Signals openness to job opportunities and invites potential employers or recruiters to engage. Collaboration: "I’m always looking for exciting new projects. If you have an idea or collaboration in mind, let's connect!" Purpose: Invites potential collaborators or clients to initiate project discussions.

Narrowing

Etiquette

• Only invite people that you personally know and who know you.
• Only invite those you'd recommend to others.
• Personalize your invitation message.
• Be sure to explain how you know them or why you want to connect.
• Add a current picture of yourself to your profile so people recognize you.

1.) Highlight Descriptions: Identify (circle, highlight, underline, etc) areas that are overly "told" and rewrite them to "show" through action, dialogue, or sensory details. 2.) Use Vivid Imagery: Strengthen descriptions with more specific, sensory language. Try adding adjectives to your development section to make it more narrative. *sensory - sights, smells, tastes, sounds, tactile/touch, feelings/emotions

SHOW, DON'T TELL

Samples to get you started...

Samples to get you started...

Choose a different consideration / prompt from your first draft. Then apply a brainstorming activity to generate ideas. Try webbing/mapping, bulleting/listing, or freewriting for 3-5 minutes.

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