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Weekly Review:Week 10

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Critics depict zoos as animal prisons where animals are exploited for entertainment. Discuss the impacts of captivity and human interaction on animal behaviour and welfare. To what extent are the concerns upheld by the scientific community?

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This point is written in a form of a sentence. It is not too detailed in a way that would be hard to find details underneath.

This key point is not relevant to animal welfare concerns because it focuses on visitor benefits rather than the issues of the well-being of animals in captivity.

Although this key point is relevant, it should be written as a full sentence rather than a heading to provide a more complete and detailed statement..

Topic 1. Key issues and concerns related to animal welfare – overview of complexity of the issue

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This is a good supporting evidence; however, it does not include a citation and page number. So, it is hard to find where this information came from. This student cannot get a score for this supporting evidence.

The key point: A key issue around the discussion of animal welfare is the lack of an international standard, and also disparity between the needs of different animals; this makes the establishment of a ‘standard’ problematic.

Key point: A key issue around the discussion of animal welfare is the lack of an international standard, and also disparity between the needs of different animals; this makes the establishment of a ‘standard’ problematic.