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BREAKOUT
VIDEOgame
VIDEOgame
PRESS START
MENU
Introduction
characters
missions
© 20XX GENIALLY ESCAPE GAMES
HI-SCORE
232323
INTRODUCTION
Before you begin editing your essays, you will practice the skills you need to make your essay better.
© 20XX GENIALLY ESCAPE GAMES
HI-SCORE
232323
CHARACTERS
Pick a character to beat the game and escape!
Spaceship
Pong
Frogger
Tetris
MISSIONS
Complete the missions to obtain the password numbers
1 Thesis
2 organization
3 word choice
4 grammar + puctuation
LEVEL 1/5
Which of the following is the thesis statement formula?
Answer the prompt + because + Three reasons why
Answer the prompt + Because
Restate thesis + SO what? + Mic Drop
LEVEL 2/5
What is this thesis statement missing? Dogs make excellent pets because they provide companionship.
Answer the prompt
Last two reasons why
Because
LEVEL 3/5
What is this thesis statement missing?because it has both positive and negative impacts on teenagers' mental health, influencing their self-esteem, social interactions, and overall well-being.
Answer the prompt
Because
Three reasons why
LEVEL 4/5
How would you make this thesis statement better? Students should not be allowed to have their phones because it is bad, they don't need them in school, and they should put them in their backpacks.
Add another reason
Shorten the sentence
Be more specific
LEVEL 5/5
Why is a thesis statement important?
it's not ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
it shows your reader where the essay is headed
It's just a part of essay writing that you have to do
CONGRATULATIONS!
THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 1
GAME OVER
CONTINUE?
yes
NO
MISSIONS
Complete the missions to obtain thepassword numbers
1 Thesis
2 Organization
3 Word choice
4 Grammar+Punctuation
LEVEL 1/5
Based on the thesis statement below, what will this essay's third body paragraph be about? Access to quality education is essential for every child because it empowers individuals, reduces poverty, and promotes social equality.
NEXT
Education is essential
Education promotes social equality
Education empowers individuals
LEVEL 2/5
Based on the thesis statement below, what will this essay's second body paragraph be about? Recycling programs should be implemented in every community because they help reduce waste, conserve resources, and mitigate environmental pollution.
NEXT
recycling programs are important because they reduce waste
Recycling programs are important because they conserve resources
pollution is a big issue
LEVEL 3/5
Based on the thesis statement below, what will this essay's first body paragraph be about? High school students should learn financial literacy skills because they prepare individuals for managing money responsibly, making informed decisions, and planning for the future.
NEXT
Learning financial literacy helps you manage money responsibly
Learning financial literacy helps you plan for the future
Learning financial literacy is important
LEVEL 4/5
Which sentence will be the thesis statement of this essay based on the topic sentences below? Body 1: Curfews help ensure safety. Body 2:Curfews promote responsible behaviors. Body 3: Curfews establish boundaries.
NEXT
Curfews for teenagers should be enforced by parents because they help ensure safety, establish boundaries, and promote responsible behavior.
Curfews for teenagers should be enforced by parents because they help ensure safety, promote responsible behavior, and establish boundaries.
LEVEL 5/5
Why is organization important in an essay?
It helps your writing make sense
NEXT
It makes your writing easier to follow
It helps keep your reader's attention
All of the above
CONGRATULATIONS!
THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 2
GAME OVER
CONTINUE?
yes
NO
MISsIONS
Complete the missions to obtain the password numbers
1Thesis
2 Organization
3 Word Choice
4 Grammar + Punctuation
LEVEL 1/5
What word could be cut from the following sentence? It is very important to limit your time spent on social media.
Very
It
Limit
LEVEL 2/5
Which words can be cut from the following sentence? I think it is important to learn sign language.
it is
I Think
To learn
LEVEL 3/5
Choose a better word to replace the phrase "very cool" in the following sentence. Going to the Smithsonian is on my bucket list because the exhibits are very cool.
Amazing
Cold
Fun
LEVEL 4/5
Pick the strongest sentence below.
Because her brother was interested in thievery, she was super upset with him and his ways.
She was sort of upset with her brother.
She was angry because her brother stole her candy.
LEVEL 5/5
Pick the strongest sentence below.
THe st. louis cardinals are the best in MLB.
The St. Louis Cardinals are amazing, always putting the best teams together, filled with top notch players from all over the world.
The St. Louis Cardinals embody resilience and excellence, consistently showcasing prowess both on the field and in their unwavering commitment to their storied legacy.
CONGRATULATIONS!
THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 3
GAME OVER
CONTINUE?
yes
NO
MISIONES
Complete the missions to obtain thenumbers of the password
1 thesis
2 Organization
3 word choice
4 grammar + puctuation
LEVEL 1/3
Which sentence is correct?
John, could you please, pass the salt?
John could you please pass the salt?
John, could you please pass the salt?
LEVEL 2/3
Which sentence is correct?
I bought apples, oranges, bananas, and grapes at the grosery store.
I bought apples, oranges, bananas, and grapes at the grocery store.
I bought apples, oranges bananas and grapes at the grocery store.
LEVEL 3/3
Which sentence is correct?
My dog, an golden retriever, loves to play fetch in the park.
My dog a golden retriever, loves to play fetch in the park.
My dog, a golden retriever, loves to play fetch in the park.
CONGRATULATIONS!
THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 4
GAME OVER
CONTINUE?
yes
NO
MISsIONS
Complete the missions to obtain thepassword numbers
1 thesis
2 organization
3 Word choice
4 Grammar + punctuaton
HI-SCORE
232323
COMPLETED
THANK YOU FOR PLAYING
© 20XX GENIALLY ESCAPE GAMES
RESTART
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Thesis
Use your knowledge of thesis statements to answer the following questions.
CONTINUE
tetris
Use this character to beat the game and escape!
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
pong
Use this character to beat the game and escape!
organization
Use your knowledge of organization to answer the following questions.
CONTINUE
Word choice
Use your knowledge of word choice to answer the following questions.
CONTINUE
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Grammar + Punctuation
Use your knowledge on grammar and punctuation to answer the following questions.
CONTINUE
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Frogger
Use this character to beat the game and escape!
Spaceship
Use this character to beat the game and escape!
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO
Are you sure you want to exit?
You will lose all the progress
yes
NO