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INTRODUCTION

Help! The gameing world has has been hacked! Now, it is full of speling, grammar, and punctuation mitsakes! Edit you're way threw each missions to save, yourself from the horrors, of bad writeing! Pay attention to the number at the end of end of each level, you will need the 4 digit password to escape at the end?

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MISSIONS

Pass the missions to obtainthe password numbers

1 SPACE

2 PUZZLE

3 STICK

4 FROG

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LEVEL 1

OF 5

What change should be made in sentence 9?--- Christina Archibald said “I don’t think teachers pay enough attention to students and how they feel because teachers focus on the education rather than the student’s feelings.”

Insert a comma after said

Change attention to atention

Delete the quotation marks ANSWER

LEVEL 2

OF 5

A punctuation mark is missing in sentence 8. To fix this error, where should one be added? --- When they are pulled out of class this creates humiliation which has a lasting effect on the student.

Add a semicolon after which

Add a comma after humiliation

Add a comma after class

LEVEL 3

OF 5

James has not used the most effective word in sentence 6. To improve this sentence, he should change sad to - --- (6) The news there was sad for him.

terrible

severe

brutal

LEVEL 4

OF 5

How should sentence 17 be changed? --- (17) Lincoln described recent events and gave credit to Union General Grant and her officers for the successful end of the war.

Insert a comma after Grant

Change her to his

Delete and

LEVEL 5

OF 5

A punctuation mark is missing after Lincoln in sentence 25. To fix this error, which of the following should be inserted? --- (25) In the darkness, Booth threatened to kill Lincoln "Now, by God, I'll put him through."

Period

Comma

Colon

CONGRATULATIONS!

THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 1

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LEVEL 1

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How should sentence 16 be changed? --- (16) The answer is to make the roads and sidewalks out of wood and elevate them above the waterline, in some places by several feet.

Delete the comma after waterline

Change them to it

Change is to was

LEVEL 2

OF 5

What change needs to be made in sentence 17? --- (17) On the day the fire started, over 55 miles of pine-block streets and 600 miles of wooden sidewalks bound the 23,000 acres of the city in a highly combustable knot.

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Delete the comma after started

Insert and before over

No change needs to be made.

LEVEL 3

OF 5

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 18? --- (18) Fires were common in all cities back then and Chicago was no exception.

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Fires were common in all cities back then and Chicago, was no exception.

Fires were common, in all cities back then, and Chicago was no exception.

Fires were common in all cities back then, and Chicago was no exception.

LEVEL 4

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How should sentence 21 be changed? --- (18) Fires were common in all cities back then and Chicago was no exception.

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Change saw to see

Delete been

Change had to has

LEVEL 5

OF 5

How should sentence 2 be revised?

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The city possessed 59,500 buildings in which a lot of them, such as the Courthouse and the Tribune Building were large and ornately decorated.

The city displayed over 59,500 buildings, many of them large and ornately decorated, like the Courthouse and the Tribune Building.

The city had 59,500 buildings, many of them large ornately decorated, such as the Courthouse and the Tribune Building.

CONGRATULATIONS!

THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 2

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LEVEL 1

OF 5

What change needs to be made in sentence 15? --- (15) How does an animal make it through all that.

Change does to did

Change the period to a question mark

Change an to a

LEVEL 2

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How should sentence 6 be changed? ---

Delete the comma after period

Change fellow to felow

Change confedent to confident

LEVEL 3

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How should sentence 17 be changed? --- (17) In the past when produce was shipped loose in containers, “there were opportunities for the animals to escape, there were more opportunities for people to look and inspect these things as they’re being shipped,” Hughes says.

Change was to were

Insert a comma after past

Delete more

LEVEL 4

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What change needs to be made in sentence 3? --- (3) Dozens of people across the U.S. has found amphibians, reptiles, bats, and other creatures — sometimes dead, sometimes alive — in their packaged produce in recent years, according to a new study in Science of the Total Environment.

Change has to have

Change U.S. to US

Change Dozens to Dozen

LEVEL 5

OF 5

What is the correct way to write sentences 18 and 19?

But now, produce is often shipped ready-to-eat in closed bags and containers – which essentially double as inescapable terrariums.

But now, produce is often shipped ready-to-eat in closed bags and containers; which essentially double as inescapable terrariums.

The sentences are written correctly in the passage.

CONGRATULATIONS!

THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 3

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LEVEL 1

OF 3

What does the word “declining” suggest about the bees?

They will slow down soon.

They might be gone one day.

They need more flowers.

LEVEL 2

OF 3

What change should be made in sentence 2? --- (2) Marta grumbled‚ “Dad‚ its been a decade since we’ve seen these people.”

Change its to it’s

Delete the comma after Dad

Change since to between

LEVEL 3

OF 3

What change should be made in sentence 4? --- “Your cousin Juan will be there‚ and you used to play basketball for hours with them.”

Change them to him

Insert a comma after basketball

Change used to play to are playing

CONGRATULATIONS!

THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 4

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