Bog Baby Analyse WO1

Lessons

5: Analyse Learning Objective: Can I understand how the Example Text is structured and the language features it has?

Ready

Make a Sentence

I will model a sentence.

Make a Sentence

Now you will make your sentence.

Make a Sentence

Steady

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Let's look at the Example Text again and annotate it.

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Annotating the Example Text

What can you tell about the structure of the text?

I will show you an example of a structural feature.

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Annotating the Example Text

What language features can we find?

I will show you some examples of different language features.

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Example Text Annotations

Can you find the rest of the structural and language features?

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Review

Can I discuss and identify structure and language features of the Example Text?

• Read what you have written out loud.
• Have I found at least one other example for each structure and language feature?

Review

6: Analyse Learning Objective: Can I find and discuss Writer's Knowledge in the Example Text?

Ready

Make a Sentence

I will model a sentence.

Make a Sentence

Now you will make your sentence.

Make a Sentence

Steady

Teach

Let's look at the Example Text again. Can you remember the structure and language features we found?

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Writer's Knowledge

I will show you where the Writer's Knowledge can be found.

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What Writer's Knowledge can you find in the text?

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Review

Can I discuss and identify the Writer's Knowledge in the Example Text?

• Read what you have written out loud.
• Have I found at least one example for each feature of the Writer's Knowledge?

Review

7: Analyse Learning Objective: Can I write a contrasting character description?

Ready

Make a Sentence

I will model a sentence.

Make a Sentence

Now you will make your sentence.

Make a Sentence

Steady

Teach

Let's have another look at the Bog Baby at the start of the story.

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Drama Opportunity: Role On the Wall

How is the Bog Baby feeling? (inside)

How can we describe what he looks like? (outside)

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Role On the Wall

Let's look at a different picture of the Bog Baby.

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Role On the Wall

How is the Bog Baby feeling now?

How can we describe what he looks like now?

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I am going to model writing a contrasting character description.

Can you see examples of noun phrases, adverbs and coordinating conjunctions?

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Write

Can I use Writer's Knowledge to write a contrasting character description?

Write

Use the word bank to help you with ideas.

Write

Review

Can I write a contrasting character description?

• Read what you have written out loud.
• Have I used noun phrases, adverbs and coordinating conjunctions?
• Does it make sense? What changes do you need to make?
• Use the sentence checker and, line by line, edit for improvement.

Review