IELTS writing

Name of the subject

2021/2022

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IELTS Academic Writing

Baljinnyam D. Anujin U. Ariunsan U.

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Content

Time management

Theoretical part

Task types

Tips

Common mistakes

Video

Reference

What is IELTS?

The International English Language Testing System (IELTS) is designed to help you work, study or migrate to a country where English is the native language. This includes countries such as Australia, Canada, New Zealand, the UK and USA. Your ability to listen, read, write and speak in English will be assessed during the test. IELTS is graded on a scale of 1-9.

IELTS Academic Writing

The writing section of the IELTS test how you write a response in an appropriate manner and how you organize the ideas and use the grammar and vocabulary accurately. The writing component encompasses two tasks- IELTS writing Task 1 and Task 2. The Writing test takes 60 minutes. There are two tasks to complete.

Writing tasks

Task 1 You will be presented with a graph, table, chart or diagram and asked to describe, summarise or explain the information in your own words. You may be asked to describe and present data, describe the stages of a process, how something works or describe an object, plan or design.Task 2You will be asked to write an essay in response to a point of view, argument or problem. You will support your point of view with relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Task types

Writing task 1

Writing task 2

1. Bar chart2. Line graph 3. Table chart 4. Pie chart 5.Process diagramm 6. Map 7. Multiple graphs

1. Discussion essay 2. Problem essay 3. Advantages & Disadvantages essay 4. Double question essay

Example of Writing Task 1

X From 1975 to 2000, hamburgers increased dramatically from 10 to 100 times per year. At the same time, fish and chips fell significantly to just under 40.

From 1975 to 2000, the consumption of hamburgers increased dramatically from 10 to 100 times per year. At the same time, the number of times that fish and chips were eaten fell significantly to just under 40.

Writing Task 2 sample

Write about the following topic: Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Model answer: New types of technology mean that you can easily connect with people throughout the world. Many believe that this is harmful and prevents us from forming meaningful friendships with others, while some people argue that using social media improves our ability to build new relationships. In my opinion, the negative impact is greater than the benefits, as I will explain. Firstly, let us consider what makes a meaningful relationship. Being able to talk and meet with people is key and this can be done in person in the traditional way, or, increasingly, online. However, seeing people in the real world is very different from meeting them online. You can learn more about them and see them at both their best and their worst; therefore, your relationship is based on more than short text communication. Many argue that modern social media allows us to connect with a variety of people from different places and backgrounds, which can be true. Nevertheless, these websites often lead young people into dangerous situations, for example, they may be bullied because of how they look. Also, their personal information becomes available to all if they are not careful and they never really know who they are connecting with. While it is true that social media sites can be very useful and help us to connect and keep in touch with others, we need to be careful and not forget that we can only make real friends in the real world. I personally believe that these are the relationships that last a lifetime. (256 words)

Time management

Time management is main important thing of IELTS

You have 60 minutes complete Task 1 and Task 2. Task 1 - 20 minutes Task 2 - 40 minutes

Time management of Task 1

Plan: 3 minutesWrite overview : 5 minutes Write specific details paragraphs : 10 minutes Error check : 2 minutes

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Time management of Task 2

Plan : 5 minutesWrite introduction : 5 minutes Write Body Paragraph 1 : 10 minutes Write Body Paragraph 2: 10 minutes Write conclusion : 5 minutes Error check : 5 minutes

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Tips

* Brainstorm: Take around 5 minutes to jot down the main points and examples that pop into your head.* Use of synonym: bad=unsuitable, normal=ordinary, get=obtain, wrong=mistaken etc,., * More doesn't mean better: Don't digress or ramble on. Stick to the main points. * Develop strong paragraphs and varied sentences. * Be careful word choice. jot down - хурдан тэмдэглэж авах.

Tips

1. Understand the question2. Plan 3. Identify your weak areas 4. Practice and get feedback 5. Complete all your tasks

Common mistakes in IELTS essays

1. Avoid using contractions in your writingExample:X don't, can't, couldn't, wouldn't do not, can not, could not, would not

2. Avoid using "There is" and There are"Example: X There are many people talking about global warming. The issue of global warming is a widely discussed topic nowadays.

Common mistakes in IELTS essays

3. Avoid using phrasal verbs put off postpone/ procrostinate take off leave/ depart 4. Avoid repetition 5. Avoid personal language (I, my, we, our) X I believe that learning a language requires practice. It is believed that learning a language requires practice

Common mistakes in IELTS essays

5. Exaggeration Really/ very/ extremely really hard difficult/ challenging very important significant/crucial/essential extremely useful invaluable

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Common mistakes in IELTS essays

6. Generalization All/every X All women struggle with tough work environment Many/ A large number of women struggle with tough work environment. X Teachers are perceived to be boring. Some teachers are perceived to be boring.

Do's and Do NOT's

1. Don’t exceed the word limit, if you are given one. 2. Avoid using informal and emotive language 3. Though it’s good to time yourself while writing, don’t keep looking at the clock, as it might only stress you out. 4. Avoid using contractions in your sentences. Example, can’t, don’t, it’s etc. 5. Slang words and colloquialisms should be avoided in the writing tasks. 6. Do not use the same words repeatedly.

1. Write an overview2. Take time to plan 3. Check your essay 4. Use passive voice 5. Paraphrase the instructions 6. Use synonym words 7. Be careful of spelling and punctuation. 8. Proofread your work multiple times and look for errors with keen eyes.

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